Do you summon my image
in that steaming cup of coffee?
Do you remember me as a time
of the day or as a street we used
to walk through- hand in hand?
Do you hearken back to our youth
-when the world was as edge-less
as our imagination?
Stir your coffee
Take a sip
Lift it to your lips
Do you recollect my face gliding
through wisps of steam?
Sip your coffee….
….bring me back to life
©Vivian Zems
Real Toads– Remember me as a time of the day – Explosions in the Sky
August 22, 2019 at 3:55 pm
I love this title, and the way you have stirred up the memories!
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August 22, 2019 at 10:37 pm
Thanks Kerry!
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August 22, 2019 at 8:16 pm
Wonderfully written, Viv! I love the lines:
‘Do you remember me as a time
of the day or as a street we used
to walk through- hand in hand?’
and the final lines bring it full circle.
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August 22, 2019 at 10:36 pm
Thanks Kim!
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August 22, 2019 at 10:11 pm
Lovely poem, Vivian.
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August 22, 2019 at 10:36 pm
Thank you Helen😊
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August 23, 2019 at 1:38 am
I love it. I found myself at several points in my life wishing people who choose to leave me behind would take action and bring me back. I stopped that habit after finding what now feels like my place in the universe.
Thanks for writing to my challenge. ❤
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August 29, 2019 at 11:44 pm
A pleasure, Kenia👍🏽
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August 23, 2019 at 3:39 am
I think we always remember those we loved at a certain time (perhaps when the need to be with them always took hold). Curiously I have often done this in my poetry to write and recall earlier moments of my love life. So naturally I enjoyed this!
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August 29, 2019 at 11:43 pm
Thank you 🙏🏾
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August 23, 2019 at 3:24 pm
Poignant!
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August 29, 2019 at 11:42 pm
Thank you!😊
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August 23, 2019 at 6:15 pm
A steamy conjuring…love it!
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August 24, 2019 at 6:00 pm
Thanks Susie!
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August 23, 2019 at 7:27 pm
Trying again to leave a comment. Argh……….I wonder how many times we are remembered over cups of coffee. I really enjoyed this.
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August 24, 2019 at 6:00 pm
Thanks Sherry!
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August 24, 2019 at 7:08 pm
This is gorgeously written, Vivian! 💖💖💖 Especially love; “Do you hearken back to our youth -when the world was as edge-less as our imagination?”
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August 25, 2019 at 6:40 pm
Thanks Sanaa😊
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August 25, 2019 at 6:06 pm
To be remembered in a cup of coffee must be a perfect way… except at night (no coffee for me at night)
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August 29, 2019 at 11:28 pm
😂
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