Fear
with its
ugly face
trys to catch my eye
It does not realise
my focus is on the prize
“I forget to remember fear”
©Vivian Zems
(# clarity pyramid)
A Clarity Pyramid (with a 1, 2, 3 5, 6, 7,8 syllable count)
A poem consisting of two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all).The first triplet has 1, 2, and 3 syllables. The title of the poem is the one-syllable word of the first triplet, which is displayed in all capital letters. This line is followed by a two-syllable line, and then a three-syllable line, both of which clarify the definition of the poem, or are synonyms for the title.The second triplet has 5, 6, and 7 syllables. Its design is based around a life event contained within the triplet which helps give a poetic view or outlook on the first line (title).The last line is 8 syllables, and is in quotations as this line contains a quote that defines the first word (title).
May 5, 2018 at 2:03 pm
Great job! Packs a punch with your final line. Hope you enjoyed the clarity pyramid form 😊
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May 5, 2018 at 2:49 pm
Loved it! Thanks Sarah!
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May 5, 2018 at 2:10 pm
Love this!
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May 5, 2018 at 2:48 pm
Thanks Penny!
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