Heart
Pumping
To stay alive
An organ truly grand
About the size of your right hand
A look is enough to know who you are
Your big heart can be heard breaking
Can shut down, shattering
It’s always good to know
It mends itself
Surely
Heart
(A Rictameter Poem)
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Vivian Zems
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Smell The Coffee 
July 1, 2017 at 4:59 pm
Excellent Vivian! Fantastic for a first try! And i love the subject. 🙂
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July 1, 2017 at 5:10 pm
Thank you☺. It feels rather strange though – like trying out a new cuisine 😉
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July 1, 2017 at 5:12 pm
Yes, I know what mean. I tried a Pantoum form yesterday. Interesting!
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July 1, 2017 at 5:18 pm
Oh no! Not another format!? Now, you know I’ve just got to try it! Watch this space while I totter off to google😂. By the way, which poem was it you used this Pantoum on?
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July 1, 2017 at 5:20 pm
It was The Moment!
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July 1, 2017 at 5:22 pm
Ok, heading there……..
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