footprints on my heart
spanning spring to autumn
what they left
©Vivian Zems
Carpe Diem Crossroads #9 Ozaki Hosai’s “on the field”
A fusion of Ozaki’s haiku into the one above
on the field
where evening has died out
my footsteps
the heart
that seeks something
I release to the sea
©Ozaki Hosai
May 14, 2018 at 5:18 pm
Lovely, Viv !
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May 14, 2018 at 5:51 pm
😊- you inspired me with ‘heart’
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May 14, 2018 at 6:17 pm
😊
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May 15, 2018 at 2:27 am
This has a very soulful feel to it.
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May 15, 2018 at 9:01 pm
Thanks Suzanne 😊
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May 16, 2018 at 3:50 am
I also used “heart” …before I read yours or Kim’s. We’re on the same beat 🙂
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May 16, 2018 at 7:05 pm
Yes, we are! I’ve just seen yours!
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