A sea of oak trees stand
bereft of flowering leaves
snow covers their branches
winter, only it’s harshness gives
Under weight of snow
under biting cold
they stand silent
their feelings don’t show
some wait in patience
to be avenged by spring
But others, not so
for deep within
a bitterness grows
hope seeps away
dreams of cornucopia afar
as barks peel in layers
leaving sap as char
These ones, now faithless
bitter bones on show
birthing agnostic acorns
falling deep into snow
©Vivian Zems
December 28, 2017 at 5:39 pm
You had me at the title!
–coal (Fireblossom)
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December 28, 2017 at 9:49 pm
🙂
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December 28, 2017 at 5:54 pm
Oh yes,,, agnostic acorn… I squirrel that.
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December 28, 2017 at 9:48 pm
🙂 🙂
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December 28, 2017 at 7:01 pm
Yes, love the agnostic acorns! Smiles.
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December 28, 2017 at 9:47 pm
Thanks, Sherry!
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December 28, 2017 at 7:18 pm
What a magnificent title! The image of hope that “seeps away dreams of cornucopia” is especially striking!
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December 28, 2017 at 9:47 pm
Thanks, Sanaa!
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December 28, 2017 at 8:19 pm
I love the last three lines of this. I never thought of agnostic acorns before but now that you mention it….
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December 28, 2017 at 9:47 pm
Thanks Toni :0, glad you liked it. Hope all’s well at home?
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December 29, 2017 at 5:04 am
My husband is steadily improving. Thank you for asking!
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December 29, 2017 at 6:45 am
Excellent !😊
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December 29, 2017 at 12:20 pm
Agnostic acorns…Love that!
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December 29, 2017 at 1:54 pm
Thank you Susie! 😊
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December 29, 2017 at 3:24 pm
Hah, fun! And gives the reader something to think about, too.
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December 29, 2017 at 4:06 pm
Absolutely! Thanks 😊
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December 30, 2017 at 11:53 am
Beautiful melancholy and images here
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December 30, 2017 at 12:15 pm
Thank you 🙂
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January 1, 2018 at 11:48 pm
Brilliant write, Vivian! Happy New Year!
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January 2, 2018 at 12:20 am
Thanks, Frank! Same to you!
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