Delilah stepped into the train station, heart pounding furiously. Her instructions were to join the throng ahead and push herself forward into the crowd. She was to act the minute the train pulled up…..
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©Vivian Zems
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April 4, 2018 at 8:28 pm
Heart-pounding action. At least she saved anyone else form being hurt.
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April 4, 2018 at 11:29 pm
A noble suicide in the end.
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April 4, 2018 at 8:46 pm
So well done! Glad she chose to sacrifice herself to save many. Can’t imagine making that choice like that…
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April 4, 2018 at 11:28 pm
It would have been a tough choice.
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April 5, 2018 at 2:55 am
Indeed.
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April 4, 2018 at 10:19 pm
I feel so bad for her. A true fictional hero.
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April 4, 2018 at 11:23 pm
Indeed, she was. Thanks for reading 😊
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April 5, 2018 at 5:45 am
A great little thriller about a great hero.
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April 5, 2018 at 11:32 am
Thank you😊
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April 5, 2018 at 9:27 am
A heroic gesture – very tense reading as she was running up the stairs. Well done.
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April 5, 2018 at 11:23 am
Thanks Jilly!
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April 5, 2018 at 3:33 pm
Oh, no! I am glad she ran and didn’t blow up the train.
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April 6, 2018 at 11:05 pm
Me too!
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April 5, 2018 at 3:42 pm
Dear Vivian,
Tough choice. At the same time, not really a suicide, a heroic act. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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April 5, 2018 at 5:54 pm
Thanks Rochelle!
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April 5, 2018 at 9:42 pm
Wow this was tense! Great suspence. She saved so many by her choice.
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April 6, 2018 at 1:58 pm
Indeed she did, Laurie 🙂
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April 6, 2018 at 2:17 pm
Very noble of her. A humane write.
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April 6, 2018 at 10:37 pm
Thank you 🙂
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