A simple woman
trying to find my way
slowly opening doors
and windows tooAm I friend or foe?
even I, don’t know
this enigma that is me
searching for myself
waiting for my cue
trying to find my way
slowly opening doors
and windows tooAm I done for this world?
who am I? I don’t know
this force that guides me
searching for myself
waiting for my cuea simple woman
trying to find my way
slowly opening doors
and these windows too
©Vivian Zems
At ‘imaginary garden with real toads‘ Gillena invited us to write on the theme ‘SLOWLY’ in not more than 100 words.
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December 23, 2017 at 3:35 pm
It can take a bit of time to find the right way, not always an easy decision which path to take. I really like the questions you wove into the poem
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December 25, 2017 at 12:43 am
Thank you!
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December 23, 2017 at 3:40 pm
I think we need to ask such questions… maybe only the slowing down make us find out ways sometimes.
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December 24, 2017 at 11:42 am
Indeed..an eternal question. Wishing you all the best and a Merry Christmas 🙂
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December 23, 2017 at 4:18 pm
I have been asking similar questions these days. Who am i? The answers are elusive. Maybe slowly opening a few more doors and windows might help
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December 24, 2017 at 11:41 am
Yes, it might..:) Wishing you all the best and a Merry Christmas 🙂
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December 23, 2017 at 5:09 pm
The ever eternal quest of humans, who and why we are. very nicely put.
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December 24, 2017 at 11:40 am
Thank you 🙂
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December 24, 2017 at 10:37 am
You are far from a simple woman dear friend. Merry Christmas to you and your family Vivian. Hugs & Blessings! 😃💛
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December 24, 2017 at 11:39 am
Aww. thanks Walt! Wishing you all the best and a Merry Christmas:)
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December 24, 2017 at 5:30 pm
💛❤💛
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December 24, 2017 at 11:07 am
Lovely use of repetition and refrain.
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December 25, 2017 at 12:36 am
Thanks 😊. Seasons greetings to you and your family 🎄🎋🎉
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December 24, 2017 at 12:37 pm
Thank goodness for those doors and windows that help us discover new worlds and new aspects of ourselves.
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December 25, 2017 at 12:29 am
Indeed! Seasons greetings to you and your family 🎄🎋🎉
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December 26, 2017 at 3:17 pm
Lovely words Vivian! I hope you had a Merry Christmas, and the New Year is filled with wonder!
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December 26, 2017 at 4:20 pm
Thanks 😊. Seasons greetings to you too 🎄🎋
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