Fall is more than just
Red and yellow folioles
Fall heralds the start
Of the year’s final season
Curtains part for winter’s show
©Vivian Zems
(#Tanka)
Fall is more than just
Red and yellow folioles
Fall heralds the start
Of the year’s final season
Curtains part for winter’s show
©Vivian Zems
(#Tanka)
November 7, 2017 at 12:09 pm
Delightful. : )
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November 7, 2017 at 6:24 pm
Thanks 😊
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November 7, 2017 at 1:23 pm
Wonderful.
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November 7, 2017 at 6:23 pm
Thank you!
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November 7, 2017 at 4:39 pm
I learned a new word: folioles! I love it! This tanka is spectacular in so many ways. Truly a pleasure to read. ❤
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November 7, 2017 at 6:19 pm
Thank you! And a pleasure to respond to the prompts 😊
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November 8, 2017 at 8:56 am
Exquisite write!💕
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November 8, 2017 at 4:07 pm
Thank you 😊
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November 8, 2017 at 4:20 pm
Yes. the final wave of autumn to the audience. Lovely poem.
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November 8, 2017 at 5:13 pm
Thanks, Toni 😊
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November 8, 2017 at 7:18 pm
I do love the changing of the seasons……you have captured it well here.
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November 8, 2017 at 8:00 pm
Thanks, Sherry!
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November 10, 2017 at 6:37 am
Bright, bright, brightest curtains… opening to show all that frosty white. Lovely imagery.
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November 10, 2017 at 7:51 am
Thank you!
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November 10, 2017 at 9:51 pm
Yes, indeed. It is the opening act for the last chapter isn’t it. I like this take Vivian☺
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November 10, 2017 at 10:37 pm
Thank you 🙂
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November 13, 2017 at 9:39 am
That is some show, Viv!
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November 13, 2017 at 9:42 am
Ta da!
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November 20, 2017 at 8:53 pm
O it’s so sublime !
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November 20, 2017 at 10:42 pm
Thank you😊
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