A pregnant world screams
as empathy rides through cities
buoyed by indignation
while ignoring sophistication
and savoir faire
A heavy world screams
as her labour groans
cause scales to fall away
from blinded eyes
unstopping ears along the way
An expectant world screams
while we coax her to keep breathin’
as the raw truth is born
©Vivian Zems
Poets and Storytellers-“Breathin’”- by Ariana Grande- hosted by Sanaa Rizvi
June 10, 2020 at 9:14 am
Wonderfully inspired – and let’s hope that truth grows and flourishes!
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June 12, 2020 at 2:05 pm
We really hope so 🙏🏽
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June 10, 2020 at 10:28 am
This is incredibly powerful, Viv! 😀 The truth can never be ignored for long. I love the way the song spoke to you and the emotions that it evoked. Timely and poignant. Thank you so much for writing to the prompt! 💝💝
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June 10, 2020 at 10:53 am
Thrilling piece, shared here..
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/06/10/keep-her-breathin-vivian-zems-smell-the-coffee/
full credit given, of course. Thanks for your generosity!
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June 12, 2020 at 2:05 pm
Thank you, I’m honoured.
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June 10, 2020 at 11:30 am
Yes, Viv, we need to keep this world breathing! Your personification portrays her as vulnerable. I hope she births a stronger world, one that puts humans in their place but also nurtures them as ever.
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June 10, 2020 at 3:38 pm
Hopefully we will retain the will to shepherd the newborn world towards something better after the birthing pain is through.
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June 12, 2020 at 2:04 pm
We sincerely hope so 🙂
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June 10, 2020 at 5:04 pm
OMG your pregnant world metaphor is amazing.
Bravo.
This has to be my favourite of what i have read from you so far
Happy Wednesday
Much💖love
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June 16, 2020 at 12:27 am
Thanks Gillena!
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June 10, 2020 at 6:30 pm
Spectacular.
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June 12, 2020 at 2:04 pm
Thanks Helen 🙏🏽
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June 10, 2020 at 10:13 pm
Today’s reality is so painful and raw. May we AT LAST have learned something, and may we AT LAST accomplish something!
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June 14, 2020 at 3:26 pm
Amen to that Beverly!
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June 11, 2020 at 12:41 am
It is sad that so many people throughout the world still think of the Earth as a source of constant profit regardless of the damage done to seas, skies, icecaps, forests, rivers and wild animals in so many countries. Luckily poets and others see this problem but there are so many blind to the own actions.
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June 12, 2020 at 2:03 pm
Absolutely!
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June 11, 2020 at 4:45 pm
I love’ pregnant world.’ And let’s pray this does bring change.
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June 12, 2020 at 2:02 pm
Amen to that, Kim 🙏🏽
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June 12, 2020 at 10:13 pm
Powerful writing…birthing change is never easy, but the world has taken up the call for justice and equality.
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June 14, 2020 at 3:25 pm
Indeed, Susie!
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