Sometimes there’s a pressure in your chest
it might sit there like a rock
or threaten to burst out (like some alien thing)
….and it won’t go away
If you choose to visit this pressure
if you dare to come close…. and follow that trail of tears
you will be transported to the chambers of your heart
(its beat – tender and true)
but left empty by the passing of your loved ones… with nothing but memories that have lost their clarity, yet somehow kept their fragrance
It’s strange how mostly the good memories remain
Where did the bad ones go?
No matter….
Let’s dust these memories and remove the cobwebs from these chambers
Paying homage to our departed
-lest the pain in that pressure Shawshank its way into our daily lives
Let’s keep ourselves happy
by letting our dearly departed
rest in peace
© Vivian Zems
dversepoets– purple patch, trail of tears, tender and true
May 13, 2020 at 3:52 am
Beautifully done, and a unique way of taking on this prompt.
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May 20, 2020 at 6:00 pm
Thank you 🙂
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May 13, 2020 at 4:26 am
I am glad that mostly the good memories remain.
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May 20, 2020 at 8:38 am
It’s always the way, isn’t it?
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May 13, 2020 at 4:36 am
Very nice Vivian. It’s strange how mostly the good memories remain … I find this to be true also. Perhaps it is a good thing~
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May 13, 2020 at 5:17 am
Your poem is one of courage, one of choice, and one of honor.
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May 13, 2020 at 8:36 am
Lovely choice of prompt words, Viv. I like the fact that you took us somewhere different, explored an emotional truth. It’s hard to face pain, but that’s how we gain strength.
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May 13, 2020 at 12:43 pm
May the departed ones always find peace and so we do.
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May 20, 2020 at 8:38 am
Amen
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May 13, 2020 at 2:15 pm
Yes indeed, may they rest in peace
Much💚love
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May 20, 2020 at 8:38 am
Amen
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May 13, 2020 at 8:06 pm
This is lovely Vivian.
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May 16, 2020 at 7:28 am
Thanks Linda🙏🏽
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May 13, 2020 at 9:23 pm
I love the thought of letting them go… we need to remember them as we go on by ourselves.
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May 16, 2020 at 7:28 am
Absolutely
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May 14, 2020 at 6:12 am
It is good to bear with all the good memories as our dear ones had so extended to us. Like the good thoughts of them!
Hank
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May 16, 2020 at 7:27 am
Indeed! 🙏🏽
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