Fear thinks it’s got one up on me
as it scrabbles along the walls
of my mind
stopping now and then to
loom and roar
showing me its red cavernous mouth
as red as a thousand gaping wounds
as crimson as eyes that have ceased
to see the hope of a future
Yes, fear thinks it’s got one up on me
as it assumes I’m moved by what I see
as it fails to see crouching courage
and misses the heartbeat of bravery
© Vivian Zems
April 1, 2020 at 1:23 am
Fear does seem to have a “red cavernous mouth”.
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April 1, 2020 at 2:13 am
Indeed, it does
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April 1, 2020 at 2:46 am
Nice reflection on angst, take care, keep the beast at bay!
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April 4, 2020 at 9:53 pm
Will do! Thanks for reading 🙂
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April 4, 2020 at 10:44 pm
my pleasure 🙂
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April 1, 2020 at 3:22 am
Vivian this part gives me goosebumps:
“it fails to see crouching courage
and misses the heartbeat of bravery”
Great lines of support in these times.
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April 3, 2020 at 2:09 pm
Thanks Jade 🙂
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April 3, 2020 at 6:41 pm
You are welcome.
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April 1, 2020 at 3:37 am
it fails to see crouching courage
and misses the heartbeat of bravery
I love your perspective on this one Vivian. Fear is just a shadow that follows us around until the sun comes back out!! It has no substance!
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April 3, 2020 at 2:09 pm
Absolutely!
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April 1, 2020 at 3:56 am
Yes, I can feel that courage and bravery, ready to rise!!
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April 1, 2020 at 3:56 am
Yes, I can feel that courage and bravery, ready to rise!!
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April 1, 2020 at 3:56 am
Yes, I can feel that courage and bravery, ready to rise!!
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April 4, 2020 at 9:52 pm
Thanks, Sherry!
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April 1, 2020 at 9:43 am
I love the defiance in this poem, Viv. Scrabbling red is a scary thought, especially as it has a ‘red cavernous mouth’. I’m so glad you end with courage and bravery.
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April 4, 2020 at 9:52 pm
Thanks, Kim!
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April 1, 2020 at 8:58 pm
I think fear has lot to fear for such a subtle bravery.
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April 2, 2020 at 10:48 am
Fear certainly scrabbles in the mind but I love your heartbeat of bravery…we must hang onto hope for a future!
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April 4, 2020 at 9:51 pm
Amen to that, Lynn 🙂
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April 2, 2020 at 4:04 pm
Well written, Vivian. Being felt by many right now – but we will not be defeated
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April 4, 2020 at 9:49 pm
Absolutely! Thanks, V.J!
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April 5, 2020 at 2:44 am
Welcome!
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