I decided to write these haikus on a gloomy day, last week. I’d just received the news that work was wrapping up until the Corona Virus was ‘gone’, another 800 had just died in Italy, and our Prime Minister was now calling for a ‘very serious’ lockdown. The loo-rolls are gone (from the store shelves), the hand-sanitiser’s gone..and so much more is gone… like the solid ground beneath my feet.
Mish is hosting Poetics today with words from Mizuta Masahide, the 17th century samurai and poet, a student of Basho: “Barn’s burnt down, now I can see the moon.”
As with all things in life, we’ll be able ‘to see the moon’ for all its beauty-after this chaos.
Needless to say, these pieces depict the struggle between faith and uncertainty, a theme that will be remembered for generations to come.
tears cascade like rain
while fear and doubt struggle
against each other
hoping for summer
while hiding back from the grave
is the new prayer
social distancing
our way to prevent the storm
while disarming fear
just like Icarus
we now fall by the hundreds
like flies from the sky
I can only smile
like a sailor lost at sea
dodging a virus
how do I inhale
Springtime’s heady aroma
from behind this mask?
by Vivian Zems
March 25, 2020 at 1:37 am
You spell out the anxieties of all of us in your haiku. This is a whole brave new world!
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March 28, 2020 at 9:30 pm
It sure is!
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March 25, 2020 at 2:50 am
After the chaos we can relax enough to see the moon. Good point: the barn is still burning.
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March 28, 2020 at 9:26 pm
It is, indeed!
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March 25, 2020 at 3:15 am
All good, but that last one really connects!
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March 25, 2020 at 3:56 am
Tis ws really good. I love the last stanza. My glasses fog up when I wear a mask!
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March 28, 2020 at 9:26 pm
Thank you 😊
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March 25, 2020 at 7:02 am
I can only smile
like a sailor lost at sea
dodging a virus
The irony of it all is so beautifully depicted.
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March 25, 2020 at 7:45 am
All of your haiku hit home, Viv, but I think this is the one that sums up feelings so far::
how do I inhale
Springtime’s heady aroma
from behind this mask?
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March 28, 2020 at 6:41 pm
thanks Kim!
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March 25, 2020 at 5:26 pm
Powerful little pieces of reality.
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March 28, 2020 at 6:58 pm
Thanks Mish!
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March 25, 2020 at 6:22 pm
Nicely written.
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March 28, 2020 at 6:45 pm
Thank you!
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March 25, 2020 at 11:05 pm
Any one of these would be perfect for these times. The strength here is sixfold.
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March 28, 2020 at 4:18 pm
(My apologies for a late response…covid- 19 had me busy! )…thank you 🙂
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March 26, 2020 at 12:03 pm
The waves if emotions, well-captured. (K)
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March 28, 2020 at 6:35 pm
Thank you! 🙂
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March 26, 2020 at 8:06 pm
So much to be anxious about… waiting for things to blow over… I think you can take off the mask and smell the spring.
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