Shy… timid…. brooding in the shadow of her mind
worrying about rocking the boat
-not wanting to cause upset…. feeling foolish
in a sea of eggshells…cringing at each misstep.
A red flag collected….. then ignored
A cracked shell spells a new trauma
…a new unraveling…even a small “un-picking” of the mind.
A red flag collected….. then ignored
There comes a point when an un-picked mind and an unraveled
spirit are too weak to bear the burden of a colonnade of red flags
I see her in the mirror every day
and remind her of those flag collecting days.
……lest she forgets
©Vivian Zems
For Kerry on Skyloverpoetry word list
February 2, 2020 at 7:53 pm
One good thing about life, the longer you live, the more easily you recognize red flgs. A creative use of the word list!
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 2, 2020 at 7:54 pm
Thanks Sherry ! So true😊
LikeLike
February 4, 2020 at 3:15 pm
I really like the way you presented this, Vivian–it’s an important message so many of us need to learn, but not preachy, just solemn and wise. Great work with the word list, too.
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 7, 2020 at 10:55 pm
Thank you!🙏🏽
LikeLike
February 4, 2020 at 5:01 pm
Such a powerful voice, Viv. I really love the way you used your selection of words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
February 5, 2020 at 7:58 pm
Thanks Kerry😊
LikeLike