I’ve been putting together selected poems from my blog, as well as adding some new ones in my forthcoming book, ‘Becoming Ink’. This poem fitted the prompt of ‘The Moment’. This is a poem reflecting ‘the last straw’- as it were.
With graveyards shouting “No Vacancies!”
and politicians lying through whitened teeth
while road works add supreme spice to
to that gauntlet into work,
it’s not the sense of chaos
neither is it the cacophony filling the air
But it’s looking down
and seeing a broken shoelace
– this is the moment that drives a man
or woman
to scream
© Vivian Zems
December 11, 2019 at 5:55 pm
The little things can make or break us.
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December 11, 2019 at 9:35 pm
Indeed!
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December 11, 2019 at 6:08 pm
Nice one.
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December 11, 2019 at 9:35 pm
Thank you 😊
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December 12, 2019 at 10:25 am
You are welcome. 🙂
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December 11, 2019 at 6:15 pm
Ha, this made me smile. While we stoically put up with all the bullcrap, it is those small annoyances that get to us. You have another book coming. Yay! I am working on a series of three myself. Enjoying the process.
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December 11, 2019 at 9:35 pm
Thanks Sherry! Wow! I look forward to reading your series 😊
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December 11, 2019 at 6:39 pm
Yes! That little pinhole in the inflated sack of Yuk, makes them all flow out! Looking forward to your book.
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December 11, 2019 at 9:34 pm
Thanks Susan!😊
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December 11, 2019 at 8:56 pm
Amazing
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December 11, 2019 at 9:34 pm
Thank you 🙏🏽
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December 17, 2019 at 9:20 am
Welcome ma
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December 11, 2019 at 9:01 pm
The last straw syndrome, very well reported
Happy Wednesday
Much ✏love
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December 11, 2019 at 9:34 pm
Thanks Gillena!
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December 11, 2019 at 9:09 pm
Agreed. I like the line about “lying through whitened teeth.”
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December 11, 2019 at 9:34 pm
Thank you 😊
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December 11, 2019 at 11:33 pm
But that is life we all live in our own small cosmos. We are not even a pack animal doing things safely in a herd except at Christmas or going to a sporting event…when it is dangerous!
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December 12, 2019 at 3:09 am
Thank you, Vivian, for writing this visual but this is the second one in a week reflecting a broken shoelace that I’ve seen. Is there a pattern? Please don’t scream for too long, the world could use a clear voice in the wilderness.
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December 12, 2019 at 10:49 am
Thank you! What was the first one? ( and I’ve stopped screaming😂)
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December 13, 2019 at 5:17 am
The first one was a picture of someone who broke their shoelace and was devastatingly crushed and crying like the world was ending. Very dramatic but was meant as a joke. I don’t get the same impression from your poem. I feel like the person is looking down after everything they have gone through and seeing the broken lace and saying, “All this gone wrong plus one more,” perhaps also saying, “What else could go wrong.”
All this, I’m glad you stopped screaming. I hope it’s been replaced with smiling (and writing).
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December 12, 2019 at 4:16 am
Broken shoelace! Ha! That does indeed drive one crazy 🙂 “lying through whitened teeth” How appropriate!
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December 12, 2019 at 10:48 am
Lol, thanks Sumana!
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December 12, 2019 at 4:41 pm
Maybe we NEED those broken shoelaces to slow down … 🙂
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December 12, 2019 at 8:44 pm
You may have a point, Margaret
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