Björn over at Dverse Poets asks us to write from a different perspective. I haven’t quite followed the brief- but it did occur to me that in the world of social media, not everything is as it appears (unless you know the individual(s) in the real world).
Linking also to Real Toads-Perspectives.
This explores the antithesis of perspectives.
What an amazing holiday
with gorgeous views
but without the camera
they’re down with the blues
What a pretty picture
so lovely and slim
but did you know
she uses a filter
to make herself thin?
Such happy faces
a wonderful life in a bubble
but you couldn’t know
if they’re masks for pain and trouble
What intention lies behind what you see?
Where’s the lie? What is the truth?
You’d have to be a sleuth
to discern
harsh weapons from soft shields
© Vivian Zems
Dverse Poets
Real Toads
November 8, 2019 at 7:09 pm
Right, this isn’t a poem from a different perspective but a poem questioning perspectives. Good criticism though, and fun rhyme.
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November 8, 2019 at 10:07 pm
Thanks Sabio😊
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November 8, 2019 at 9:59 pm
I hear you every step of the way on this, Vivian. I know there are studies out there that say “fakebook” leaves people feeling depressed and inadequate. It’s like the individuals are selling a product (themselves) instead of sharing transparency and honesty. I think as fantasy it might work, but it isn’t real.
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November 8, 2019 at 10:06 pm
I quite agree!
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November 8, 2019 at 10:12 pm
This is dead on accurate Vivian. Imagine of everyone told the real story on Social Media. It would read like that magazine- The National Enquirer-LOL. Well done.
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November 8, 2019 at 10:35 pm
Thanks Linda😊
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November 8, 2019 at 10:27 pm
You accurately expose the “virtual reality” of facebook!
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November 8, 2019 at 10:35 pm
Indeed! Who knows what’s real anymore!
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November 9, 2019 at 9:58 am
Ah. not quite the perspective I meant, but of course questioning the perspective of what we see when opening instagram…
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November 9, 2019 at 5:56 pm
I know, Björn. Lol- my perspective on your prompt😀
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November 10, 2019 at 3:07 am
Nicely done Vivian. Especially like the soft shields
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November 10, 2019 at 9:49 am
Thank you 😊
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November 12, 2019 at 2:44 am
This is absolutely brilliant, Viv! ❤️ I resonate with social media being questionable at times .. who knows what the other person is hiding?
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November 12, 2019 at 12:54 pm
Indeed! 😱
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November 12, 2019 at 8:43 pm
No one knows I’m actually a talking dog. 😉
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November 12, 2019 at 8:44 pm
You didn’t fool me!😂
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November 12, 2019 at 11:27 pm
Oh, truth takes some searching to find…Viewpoints often don’t like a microscope.
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November 13, 2019 at 6:04 pm
Absolutely!
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November 13, 2019 at 2:30 am
Sadly mankind is both obtuse and adverse with major interest in self rather than mankind or even the Earth as a whole. How curious it is that so many languages are spoken on Earth. It is almost a sign that Earth is a planet that is a prison for all useless human forms only we don’t know that!
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November 13, 2019 at 6:05 pm
Good insight, Robin
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November 13, 2019 at 1:29 pm
Nothing seems real in today’s world, social media influence can be dangerous.
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November 13, 2019 at 6:04 pm
It can, indeed!
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November 15, 2019 at 2:57 pm
Ah, those ‘soft shields’… well said, Viv.
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November 17, 2019 at 2:54 pm
Thanks Rommy!
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December 21, 2019 at 2:20 pm
Ah, these things can be so complicated. Well penned — it’s important to point out how a slight shift in perspective changes it entirely.
P.s. I apologize for such a long delay in reading and responding to your take on the prompt.
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December 24, 2019 at 7:50 pm
Thanks Anmol, I’m glad you got to read it 😊
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