There’s nothing maladroit about
picking up your broken pieces
It may be a war that rages within your bones
It may be thoughts that scatter like rotting teeth after a bar fight
It may even be frozen breath- too strangled to scream
It may be untold pressure – crushing all reason from thought
But it is the process of ‘becoming’
It is the crafting of a new mind
It is the creation of a new narrative
It is making of a diamond
-as you are jigsawed
into new perfection
©Vivian Zems
Real Toads- Maladroit
September 28, 2019 at 4:20 pm
kaykuala
Yes! after all, it is a learning process for which everyone has to go through
Hank
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September 28, 2019 at 5:31 pm
It’s a continuous evolving process! ❤️
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September 28, 2019 at 5:33 pm
Oh my, what an incredibly uplifting message! Art equally powerful.
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September 28, 2019 at 6:25 pm
Thanks Helen!
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September 28, 2019 at 9:32 pm
I love how you grow from the broken to mended.
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September 28, 2019 at 11:46 pm
I love the lines about being jigsawed into a new perfection. With time, we can make disparate pieces fit.
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September 29, 2019 at 2:53 am
…it is the making of a diamond 🙂
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September 29, 2019 at 3:55 am
Everything falling into place with time 💚 thank you for this Vivian 🙂
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September 29, 2019 at 4:25 am
There’s hope for all of us. Cross the “T’s” and dot the “I’s”.
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September 29, 2019 at 7:02 am
We must try👍🏽
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September 29, 2019 at 5:24 am
The most important thing in life is to please oneself but sadly we must first stop trying to please others (partners excepted!) Otherwise when you are older you will be saying “I wish I had done this or that” instead.
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September 29, 2019 at 6:59 am
Absolutely!
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September 29, 2019 at 7:06 am
I enjoyed the bevy of metaphors, Viv; your dental background peeped through in the thoughts scattering like rotting teeth’! I love the way you directed the shift from broken pieces to the making of a diamond and the phrase ‘jigsawed into new perfection’.
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September 29, 2019 at 9:53 am
I love the sense of being able to build yourself – it leads to great possibilities
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September 29, 2019 at 11:00 pm
I love as you are jigsawed into new perfection. It speaks to the preciseness and attention to detail to become what you want to be. Lovely,Vivian!
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