What nickname do I give
a song sparked by the
sight of a smile?
What synonym do I append
to a laugh that whistles
like the wind?
‘Tis only a poem I can think of
-a poem I pen
anytime I think of you
©Vivian Zems
Dverse Poets- “Nick”- Quadrille (44 words)
September 9, 2019 at 9:23 pm
How beautiful, Vivian. Loving your alliteration here.
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September 9, 2019 at 9:43 pm
Thanks De!
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September 9, 2019 at 9:29 pm
I do love a big smile in a poem… the best reason to write.
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September 9, 2019 at 11:31 pm
Absolutely!
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September 9, 2019 at 9:36 pm
What a smiley poem this is!
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September 9, 2019 at 9:42 pm
Thanks Toni!
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September 9, 2019 at 9:52 pm
Such a happy poem!
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September 9, 2019 at 10:48 pm
Thank you Linda!
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September 9, 2019 at 10:00 pm
Awww, so sweet. Must be a pretty special person to inspire this poem 🙂
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September 9, 2019 at 10:47 pm
Thank you 😊
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September 9, 2019 at 11:11 pm
You are welcome, Vivian.
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September 9, 2019 at 10:16 pm
What sweet affection. Well said.
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September 9, 2019 at 11:31 pm
Thanks Beverly 😊
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September 9, 2019 at 10:42 pm
Light hearted, yet romantic. Titles can be allusive. They are always the last thing I write.
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September 9, 2019 at 10:47 pm
😊thank you
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September 10, 2019 at 1:43 am
Very nicely done Vivian! What a compliment to the one you love!!
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September 10, 2019 at 1:36 pm
Thank you 🙏🏾 Dwight!
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September 10, 2019 at 6:36 am
A love song! Beautiful.
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September 10, 2019 at 1:35 pm
Thank you!
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September 10, 2019 at 8:45 am
That’s such a happy love quadrille, Viv, with a smile and a laugh that whistles
like the wind! A poem is never only a poem. 🙂
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September 10, 2019 at 1:33 pm
Thanks Kim!
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September 10, 2019 at 11:48 am
This smacks of affection! Great read… 🙂
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September 10, 2019 at 1:32 pm
Thanks Rob!
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September 11, 2019 at 12:57 pm
I so love the quadrille form….and this one, Vivian, is a delight! Had not thought of this use for nick….well done!
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September 11, 2019 at 8:51 pm
Thanks Lillian 😊
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September 12, 2019 at 3:07 am
Lovely, Vivian…
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September 12, 2019 at 7:45 am
Thanks Bette!😊
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