An excerpt from my upcoming poetry chapbook Smiles Under Pillows -(due out at the end of this month)
This poem is taken from the ‘Sad Smiles’ chapter and I thought this image, “Emperor of the dawn” by Quincy Washington , apt to describe the decay of humanity.
There is enough of
the narrow-mind
the unschooled
the uncouth and
the uninformed
to keep the world in constant chaos
and constant fluxThe prophets and seers are an aberration…(it seems)
The clothing of truth is nebular
while the coating of lies grows even thicker
on forked tongues
Love has become nothing but a feeling
while….
broken hearts lie bleeding – abandoned on the
trash- heap of lifeChild against father
father against mother
brother against sister
and all are proud of it
‘Tis the new normal
..the slew of insanity…a perfect storm
©Vivian Zems
August 4, 2019 at 2:54 am
That ending, that sight of the world (so true and terrible) really hurts. Sigh.
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August 4, 2019 at 8:37 am
The list in the opening stanza is an effective build-up to the alliteration in ‘constant chaos and constant flux’, a cacophony of harsh consonants, Viv! I also like the juxtaposition of nebular truth and the ‘coating of lies’ that ‘grows even thicker on forked tongues’. And the shape of your poem is tornado-like, whirling towards the perfect storm.
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August 4, 2019 at 8:59 am
Love has become nothing but a feeling
while….
broken hearts lie bleeding – abandoned on the
trash- heap of life..
A truly sad state of affairs, such storms can only leave devastation in their wake.
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August 5, 2019 at 1:27 am
Once our desire was survival but those days are long gone and that wish has turned into greed and dominance. Once we nurtured but now we destroy.I hate to see a world so foul for my grandhildren to live in.I think you feel the same.
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August 8, 2019 at 1:01 pm
Indeed, I do. Thanks for reading 🙂
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August 7, 2019 at 1:01 am
Amazing what we have allowed to happen. Well said, Vivian.
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August 8, 2019 at 12:56 pm
Thanks Sara!
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