I revel in the wonder of tears
that fall – right as rain
unto fresh cut meadows
not caring if they were born
of deep joy or many sorrowsI’m awed at the tranquil vibe
of the exhausted sigh
carried on a raven wing
across September skies..such a sight wrapped in strength
and beauty can only be heaven-sent
©Vivian Zems
Inspired by Real Toads- the colours of paint; right as rain, fresh cut, tranquil vibe, raven wing, September skies, heaven sent
May 31, 2019 at 12:05 am
Brilliant!
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June 11, 2019 at 1:51 pm
Thank you!
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June 11, 2019 at 5:03 pm
My pleasure!
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May 31, 2019 at 1:55 am
Oh Vivian, this is incredibly moving! ❤️ I especially love; “the tranquil vibe of the exhausted sigh carried on a raven wing across September skies.” 🙂
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May 31, 2019 at 11:05 am
I’m awed too – especially with “the tranquil vibe
of the exhausted sigh
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June 11, 2019 at 1:50 pm
Thank you! 🙂
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May 31, 2019 at 2:42 pm
Those tears are “Heaven sent”. I believe that God gave this ‘reflex’ talent where and when it’s most needed. For sure the weaker sex and most all in degrees as needed in the weaker moments. I.e. the latter in grief, happiness, and other extreme emotional times. Thank you for sharing you insight, beautiful.
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June 11, 2019 at 1:48 pm
Thanks Jim 🙂
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June 11, 2019 at 1:49 pm
I was about to begin a rant about ‘the weaker sex’…but I’ll choose the path of peace and harmony today. (Lol!)
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May 31, 2019 at 5:11 pm
Beautiful Vivian.
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June 11, 2019 at 1:50 pm
Thank you!
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May 31, 2019 at 6:20 pm
Beautiful, peaceful…I need it today
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May 31, 2019 at 9:46 pm
I wonder so much at those tears… they are so precious but so hard to carry.
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June 11, 2019 at 1:53 pm
Indeed!
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June 1, 2019 at 2:22 am
so beautiful… it is almost a prayer.
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June 11, 2019 at 1:46 pm
Thanks Margaret
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June 1, 2019 at 5:44 pm
You have created the scene so well in these lyrical lines.
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June 11, 2019 at 8:12 pm
Thanks Kerry 🙏🏾
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