The prompt today is this: “write about love for someone who does not know you love them”. Well, everyone in my life already knows I love them….I’m boring that way. So, I’ve used my imagination ……. what else?
my pen bleeds
words
all over this paper
not to deface it
but to echo my heart’s desires
.….too bad you can’t read between the lines
©Vivian Zems
Real Toads– Fireblossom Friday – Love
#NaPoWriMo 2019- National Poetry Month Challenge [DEFACE]
April 12, 2019 at 9:39 pm
Wonderful poem. Short and to the point.
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April 12, 2019 at 10:38 pm
Thanks Toni!
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April 12, 2019 at 10:10 pm
Cleverrrr!
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April 12, 2019 at 10:38 pm
Thanks Shay! (if one is tired, one can write micro-chopped-up-prose…*evil laugh*)
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April 12, 2019 at 10:29 pm
Teaser at the end made me read and re read and read again…..too bad.
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April 12, 2019 at 10:36 pm
Indeed! Glad to see you again, doc 🙂
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April 16, 2019 at 1:02 am
Glad to be here Viv😊 . Your poetry was one of those I missed much. Keep up the brill work.
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April 13, 2019 at 2:21 am
Well written poem
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April 14, 2019 at 11:14 pm
Thank you 🙂
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April 15, 2019 at 1:04 am
A pleasure
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April 13, 2019 at 3:18 am
Oh, very cool!
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April 14, 2019 at 11:14 pm
Thank you 🙂
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April 13, 2019 at 4:53 am
But I would try, I like challenges.
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April 14, 2019 at 11:14 pm
Lol…Jim!
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April 13, 2019 at 5:06 am
Love it! Yes, it is unfortunate he can’t read between the lines.
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April 14, 2019 at 11:14 pm
🙂
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April 13, 2019 at 9:39 am
Nailed it!
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April 14, 2019 at 11:13 pm
Yay!! Thanks!
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April 13, 2019 at 9:44 am
The last line says it all!
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April 14, 2019 at 11:13 pm
Thanks Kerry!
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April 13, 2019 at 9:59 am
Nicely done, Viv! Some people just can’t read between the lines.
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April 14, 2019 at 11:13 pm
Lol! Absolutely!
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April 13, 2019 at 6:31 pm
Much spoken in few words. Nice Vivian!
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April 14, 2019 at 8:17 am
Thanks Carrie😊
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April 14, 2019 at 12:58 am
clever.
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April 14, 2019 at 11:11 pm
Mérci!
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August 13, 2019 at 4:34 am
A very well written poem.Thanks for sharing.
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August 17, 2019 at 7:46 pm
Thank you ! I sure will.
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