Right, I’m winging it here with a combination of prompts- much like an experiment. I’ve combined the use of homographs with a philosophical question: “Why do we ignore red flags?”. And to top it off, chopped up my prose…and passed it off as a poem! A cardinal sin. But hey, it’s Sunday and I’m fit to drop from exhaustion…..so please be merciful.
Oh, why do you carry out such experiments?
Especially when you subject a subject
to ignore red flagsWhy would you do that?
You’re simply putting them in a situation
where their heart will be used like a putting ball
Your subject proceeds further into a dire
situation from which there are no proceeds;
emotional or financialWhy would you do that?
May I suggest the next subject isn’t colour blind
and doesn’t wear those rose-tints?
Perhaps then they will see what needs to be seen
and leave that red flag alone…where its always been
©Vivian Zems
Homographs used: subject, putting and proceeds
Real Toads- Ask a Question, Real Toads-Homographic Fun, Poetry Pantry #443
BEFORE YOU GO….
……..my poetry chapbook, Lift Off! is finally ready!! If you’re interested in receiving an advanced draft copy, please send me an email on viviannz488@gmail.com with the subject line LIFT OFF, and I’ll send it to you. Limited copies only for advanced readers before launch.
Available formats are pdf, .mobi and epub. Just let me know!
March 17, 2019 at 6:27 pm
So well done, Vivian. I’m impressed. And yay re your new book!
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March 17, 2019 at 9:40 pm
Thank you Sherry- on both counts.
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March 17, 2019 at 8:55 pm
I think your well-practised ability to craft a poem has come to your rescue and made this more than mere chopped-up prose. It packs a punch!
Yes, congrats on the book!
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March 17, 2019 at 9:39 pm
Thank you, Rosemary 🙏🏾
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March 17, 2019 at 8:59 pm
I see a red flag here!
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March 17, 2019 at 9:39 pm
😂🤣🤣
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March 17, 2019 at 9:54 pm
A very well crafted and color blind poem. Congrats on your new book too!!!!
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March 17, 2019 at 11:24 pm
Thanks Toni! …. on both counts😀
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March 17, 2019 at 10:39 pm
One misses red flags when wearing rose colored glasses… I love this. Red flags come as warnings, but too often one feels smarter than their intuition. Congratulations on the book!!
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March 17, 2019 at 11:23 pm
Great insight, Susie! And thank you 🙏🏾
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March 18, 2019 at 12:34 am
Yes, sometimes one needs to leave those red flags alone.
And yes, congrats on the book!
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March 18, 2019 at 9:46 pm
Absolutely! Thanks Mary!
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March 18, 2019 at 1:20 am
Love the thoughts and questions in this Vivian! Well crafted and wise! I will join in on the congratulations on your book! So exciting!
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March 18, 2019 at 9:45 pm
Exciting indeed…and exhausting! Thanks Carrie!
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March 18, 2019 at 10:10 am
Oh this is brilliant! ❤️ Congratulations on your book, Vivian 😀 Yayyy ❤️
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March 18, 2019 at 9:44 pm
Thanks Sanaa!
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March 18, 2019 at 12:48 pm
Exhausted or not, I think you pulled of this poem/prose thing rather well!
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March 18, 2019 at 9:44 pm
Thank you!…So kind of you to say
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March 18, 2019 at 1:29 pm
Why would we, indeed? Especially when we are always so insistent in wanting the truth. We are the weirdest beings, aren’t we?
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March 18, 2019 at 9:43 pm
Indeed we are!
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