No story ever stands alone; there being a backstory buried beneath.
Even the backstory has its own backstory….and so on. So next time you see a closed door…think again.
Behind closed doors
where naked skies reign
without moon or stars
or sunshine by dayBehind closed doors
where silence screams
to be heard
through open windowsBehind closed doors
without moon or stars
to illuminate naked faces
or reveal hidden scars
©Vivian Zems
Real Toads– What if the moon disappeared tomorrow?
February 17, 2019 at 11:52 pm
This is such nice compilation! Nice words!
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February 18, 2019 at 1:19 am
So true.
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February 18, 2019 at 1:34 am
This is so beautiful, Vivian. I love the use of the closed doors.
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February 18, 2019 at 1:44 am
“where silence screams to be heard…..” I love it.
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February 18, 2019 at 3:08 am
The backstories to closed doors… it gives one pause
“where naked skies reign”
“where silence screams”
“Behind closed doors without moon or stars”
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February 18, 2019 at 4:25 am
Well written
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February 18, 2019 at 4:43 am
enjoyed this we need those closed doors so the truth can lay bear to clear the air.
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February 18, 2019 at 5:13 am
I love what this says to me–even if the moon was to disappear, the stories of what it used to be like wouldn’t vanish… That knowledge, would forever run through the blood, never allowing the culprit (and the innocent) forget the destruction.
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February 18, 2019 at 2:47 pm
Yes, the “closed door” is a symbol, for secrets and scars.
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February 18, 2019 at 5:13 pm
“Behind closed doors where naked skies reign without moon or stars or sunshine by day,”.. this is absolutely phenomenal, Viv! ❤️
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February 18, 2019 at 8:06 pm
I love the way you resemble the disappearing moon to a prison… yes it would be like that
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February 19, 2019 at 12:17 am
Oh, there is such a different world behind closed doors.
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February 19, 2019 at 8:26 am
Oh, those closed doors hide so much. It hurts to think of the pain and the hurt that reside there beneath a moonless and starless sky.
Well-penned!
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February 19, 2019 at 11:11 am
Dark on top of dark.
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