Slice me open and take a peak within
feel the cords that hold me together
they are tissues of scars I’ve earnedFair and square-without bargain they were earned
stretching from stem to stern buried within
they are my strength binding me togetherBut wait- let’s reason together
you cannot take from me what I’ve rightfully earned
they are my inner core- my backbone withinWithin me, holding me together- proud of what I’ve earned
©Vivian Zems
Real Toads– using the tritina poetic form
October 15, 2018 at 10:06 pm
Brilliantly Tritinarrific!
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October 16, 2018 at 1:05 am
Thank you David!
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October 16, 2018 at 10:58 am
Great ! Thanks for sharing
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October 18, 2018 at 10:33 am
Cheers!
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October 16, 2018 at 2:02 pm
Nice… yes, appreciate those scars. Reminds me a bit of Eugenie showing her scar in her wedding dress. 🙂
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October 18, 2018 at 10:32 am
Oh did she? Missed the whole thing. Come to think of it, I know next to nothing about her.
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October 16, 2018 at 7:12 pm
Yes, we can be proud of the scars, it is what makes us the strong women that we are.
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October 17, 2018 at 5:22 pm
Indeed!😊
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October 16, 2018 at 8:57 pm
Earned like wrinkles which can represent wisdom like scars can represent strength. “Backbone” says is all.
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October 17, 2018 at 5:21 pm
Absolutely-! Thank you 😊
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October 17, 2018 at 5:09 pm
This is exquisite and brilliantly written.
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October 17, 2018 at 5:20 pm
Thanks Barry!😊
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October 18, 2018 at 6:47 pm
Scars, within and out, are the symbol of the lives that we have lived. We have indeed rightfully earned them, through our struggle and pain.
Very well said, Vivian! I love the tenacity of your voice. 🙂
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October 18, 2018 at 7:37 pm
Thank you Anmol!
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October 27, 2018 at 10:29 pm
So very true and beautiful Vivian!!
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October 28, 2018 at 10:31 pm
Thanks, Carrie!
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