Autumn knocks on Season’s door
impatient to settle in
Summer packs his bags in annoyance
-not even a decent check out time!
After all that warmth
After all that sunshine
After setting the stage for birdsong
After luscious green carpets
After copious doses of Vitamin D
-he and Sun are asked to leave
Just like that!
Sun checked out an hour ago
so Summer walks through Season’s door alone
-passing a grinning Autumn
“Enjoy it while it lasts” Summer smiles sweetly, “Winter is coming!”
Autumn’s face drops and she
hurries inside- casting furtive glances behind her
Sending reassuring cooling winds through her window
(on a world too sad to care)
she hums a comforting tune to herself as she readies her orange and brown palette
-her colours for old leaves, curtains and carpets on a now decaying earth
And she shivers when she remembers that Winter with his sharpened claws- isn’t far behind
©Vivian Zems
Real Toads– Earth Grief
September 27, 2018 at 6:19 pm
I love the personifications in your poem and the line “enjoy it while it lasts.”
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September 27, 2018 at 6:36 pm
Thank you 😊
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September 27, 2018 at 6:57 pm
I love this, Vivian, the preparing of autumn’s palette especially (my favourite time of year!) I love the tone of this poem, the voice of the seasons changing places. We have to enjoy the golden sunshine, as soon the rains will come. Thanks for writing to my prompt.
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September 27, 2018 at 9:33 pm
Thanks Sherry! And what a great prompt….sad in places too.
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September 27, 2018 at 7:42 pm
I love your poems, the seem simple to read, deep in meaning with a great rythym.
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September 27, 2018 at 9:33 pm
Thank you for saying that! It has to make sense – otherwise, even I get bored 🙂
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September 27, 2018 at 8:31 pm
I love the personification, Viv, especially:
‘she hums a comforting tune to herself as she readies her orange and brown palette
-her colours for old leaves, curtains and carpets on a now decaying earth
And she shivers when she remembers that Winter with his sharpened claws- isn’t far behind’.
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September 27, 2018 at 9:32 pm
Thanks, Kim!
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September 27, 2018 at 9:12 pm
Yes the personification works so fine… great until that winter comes wit its claws.
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September 27, 2018 at 9:29 pm
Ouch! That winter is vicious…always
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September 28, 2018 at 12:58 am
I enjoyed your personification of summer and fall with the warning, winter is coming. Yes it is and not soon enough
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September 28, 2018 at 2:28 am
Love this…
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September 28, 2018 at 4:00 am
Love the exchange, the personality you’ve crafted for Autumn and Summer. They feel so believable, the colors so bright, the emotions so vivid…
Maybe, one day Summer will embrace the chance for a rest, and Autumn will learn to live in the moment. Winter might be coming, but it isn’t here yet.
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September 28, 2018 at 7:43 am
This it so amusingly beautiful with the personification of the seasons. What a great read.
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September 29, 2018 at 9:16 am
Thank you 🙂
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September 28, 2018 at 9:07 am
Such an evocative seasonal poem.
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September 29, 2018 at 9:15 am
Thanks Kerry!
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September 29, 2018 at 10:25 pm
Nice poem!
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October 4, 2018 at 11:34 am
Thank you 😊
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September 30, 2018 at 5:29 am
I too like your personification, you wrote it well. I felt sorry for Summer, though none of them treat each other very nicely.
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October 4, 2018 at 11:32 am
You’re so right😂 thank you!
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September 30, 2018 at 4:48 pm
Each season, it seems, has its comeuppance.
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October 4, 2018 at 11:29 am
It appears so!
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