A heart falls on a carpet of thorns
hurt and dismayed that the cushion
of promises has been so callously replaced
It lies there- bleeding from its many wounds.
But
….slowly it begins to heal- scar tissue toughening its innards
It beats with a new strength- gathering power as it pumps new hopes and dreams into existence
The heart takes pride in its scars
-for they are the Degrees earned
from the classroom of life
©Vivian Zems
dVerse poets
September 4, 2018 at 11:43 pm
Nice line: “The heart takes pride in its scars” I like how you compare those scars to Degrees earned in life.
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September 5, 2018 at 7:24 pm
Thanks Frank!
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September 5, 2018 at 12:13 am
“the Degrees earned” — nice. But if we take not pride in our degrees? But certainly the scars can protect later damage.
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September 5, 2018 at 7:23 pm
Absolutely!
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September 5, 2018 at 1:12 am
“classroom of life” – great phrase – we can learn lessons our entire life if we choose to see life that way.
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September 5, 2018 at 7:23 pm
Indeed, so true, Jo
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September 5, 2018 at 1:46 am
It beats with a new strength- gathering power as it pumps new hopes and dreams into existence – I get a lot of encouragement from this
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September 5, 2018 at 7:22 pm
My pleasure 😇
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September 5, 2018 at 2:29 am
Yes! This is the passage through life, the hurting of the heart, the reviving, hurting again, growing strong, resilience! Wonderful!
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September 5, 2018 at 7:22 pm
🙏🏾
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September 5, 2018 at 2:22 pm
I really like your ending:
The heart takes pride in its scars
-for they are the Degrees earned
from the classroom of life
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September 5, 2018 at 7:21 pm
Thanks Dwight!
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September 5, 2018 at 3:36 pm
This is just what I needed to read today. thank you.
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September 5, 2018 at 7:21 pm
Thank you 🙏🏾
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September 5, 2018 at 3:56 pm
Lessons to be learned, for sure, providing we are wise enough to heed them! Well said.
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September 5, 2018 at 7:20 pm
Thank you Beverly 😊
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September 5, 2018 at 7:27 pm
The heart takes pride in its scars… very apt.
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