My mistakes
tucking them in at night
pulling the covers up to their chins
this is the truce we’ve made for perfect peace to reign
our agreement so I can get my beauty sleep
when morning comes they bound up to me
like ghost children they are
my mistakes
©Vivian Zems
(#Trois-par-Huit)
MLMM Saturday Mix-Lucky Dip
Trois-par-Huit (Three-by-Eight or Octa-Tri for short), a poem containing three stanzas of 3, 3 and 2 lines OR 3, 2 and 3 lines: 8 lines total with a syllable count of 3, 6, 9, 12, 12, 9, 6, 3. The rhyming pattern is AAB BBC CC where the last line is the title of the poem and summarizes the meaning of the poem.
August 26, 2018 at 12:16 am
I wish my mistakes would stay tucked in – they creep out and harass me through the night lol ! Thanks for joining in and well done with a tricky structure this week
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August 26, 2018 at 5:26 pm
Thanks Sarah!😊
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August 26, 2018 at 6:02 am
kaykuala
like ghost children they are
my mistakes
They need all the attention but one often overdo things that gets them pampered and over protected. It is still ok if some form of control is in place!
Hank
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August 26, 2018 at 5:25 pm
Great insight, Hank! Thank you 😊
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August 26, 2018 at 7:16 pm
Nice take on the form Vivian. This was challenging.
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August 27, 2018 at 4:18 pm
Indeed it was. Thanks Linda😊
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