Poems are the keys to unlocking depth of feeling
-revealing yearnings of the heartand freeing us from the rigid four-walled box of our minds
And yet
they often arrive
wearing the invisible cloak of metaphors seeking the discerning spirit who‘gets it’
©Vivian Zems
Quadrille Monday at dVerse
Real Toads– Tuesday Platform
August 13, 2018 at 8:21 pm
I love that “invisible cloak of metaphors,” especially. And the mind as a four-walled box. Yes.
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August 14, 2018 at 7:00 pm
Thank you!☺️
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August 13, 2018 at 8:35 pm
Poems definitely “cloak” themselves, but not too tightly, for those willing to peek. Love it.
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August 14, 2018 at 6:59 pm
Thank you!😊
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August 13, 2018 at 9:00 pm
Nice description of poems as keys wrapped in their own box of metaphors that needs to be opened.
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August 14, 2018 at 6:59 pm
Thanks Frank- you ‘get it’!
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August 13, 2018 at 9:10 pm
This poem has a great old-fashioned key shape, Viv, and I love the lines:
‘…freeing us from the rigid four-walled box of our minds’
and
‘wearing the invisible cloak of metaphors seeking the discerning spirit who
‘gets it’’.
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August 14, 2018 at 6:58 pm
Thanks Kim!😊
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August 13, 2018 at 9:19 pm
I like that cloak. Poems often walk out again without ever being understood. They do when I read them anyway 🙂
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August 14, 2018 at 6:57 pm
Same here… for those heavily-cloaked ones😅
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August 14, 2018 at 9:49 pm
I think it must be intentional.
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August 14, 2018 at 10:19 pm
😂- when I read those kind of poems I’m bamboozled… and wonder what everyone else is talking about when they ‘get it’ – and I don’t! It used to bother me – not anymore. Life’s too short!
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August 14, 2018 at 10:23 pm
You can’t second guess. Usually the people who praise obscure poetry refrain from making a comment about the content, (just a ‘wow that is wonderful’ sort of comment) because they didn’t know what it was all about any more than you did 🙂
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August 14, 2018 at 10:25 pm
*howling laughter *🤣🤣🤣
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August 15, 2018 at 8:07 am
🙂
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August 13, 2018 at 10:18 pm
so true
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August 14, 2018 at 6:56 pm
Thank you!
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August 13, 2018 at 10:34 pm
A poem about poetry–always a joy to read and take to heart. Pandora has nothing over you; a fun ride.
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August 14, 2018 at 6:56 pm
I’m honoured 👍🏽Thank you 😊
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August 13, 2018 at 11:12 pm
It depends on one’s interpretation. I like that poems are arriving in invisible cloaks of metaphors.
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August 14, 2018 at 7:01 pm
Thanks Grace!
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August 13, 2018 at 11:21 pm
Beautifully written!
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August 14, 2018 at 6:56 pm
Thanks Jo!
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August 14, 2018 at 12:07 am
Nice Vivian! You are so right. Especially the old classic poets… cloaked in metaphor for sure!!
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August 14, 2018 at 6:55 pm
Thanks Dwight!🙏🏾
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August 14, 2018 at 12:10 am
Eloquent and true, Vivian! Nicely done!
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August 14, 2018 at 6:55 pm
Thank you😊
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August 14, 2018 at 12:27 am
How true this is. That metaphorical layer can be a layer of protection for the writer, and a layer to peel for the reader.
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August 14, 2018 at 9:44 am
Absolutely! Thanks Mish!
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August 14, 2018 at 5:30 am
You had me at the opening line 😊 beautifully profound write ❤
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August 14, 2018 at 6:55 pm
Thanks Sanaa!😊
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August 14, 2018 at 5:49 am
Oh there is so much truth in this!
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August 14, 2018 at 7:01 pm
Thank you 🙏🏾
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August 14, 2018 at 10:57 am
What a delight poetry is are as we poets jump in telling the truth or lying through our teeth in our poetic words as the feelings and form are far more important that accuracy and readers say “I wish I had written that”. Beautifully written Vivian.
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August 14, 2018 at 6:54 pm
Thanks Robin!😀
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August 14, 2018 at 11:36 am
You surmise both the art and craft of writing and reading poetry so well in this pointed verse.
To be able to convey things even in the guise of a metaphor requires it to be discerned for it to fulfill its destiny.
-HA
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August 14, 2018 at 6:53 pm
Absolutely!
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August 14, 2018 at 11:58 am
*giggle* Ah, that they do. Sometimes it’s fun seeing the wild ways a poem is interpreted. I’ve been surprised/ delighted at some of the things readers saw that I didn’t intentionally place there. But yes, it’s a cool feeling when someone ‘gets it’ as you intended.
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August 14, 2018 at 6:53 pm
It is wonderful when that happens 😊
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August 14, 2018 at 2:10 pm
readers and writers are often one of those blind dates that turn out better than expected even when not on the same wavelength
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August 14, 2018 at 6:52 pm
Great insight, Laura! I’ll remember this.
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August 14, 2018 at 2:44 pm
Nicely done! That says it all.
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August 14, 2018 at 6:51 pm
Thank you 🙏🏾
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August 14, 2018 at 3:17 pm
So few people ‘get it’.
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August 14, 2018 at 6:50 pm
😊… only those with a functioning third 👁
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August 14, 2018 at 3:45 pm
Loving this! And oh yes….once we let our poem “go”, we hope others “get it.” Or if not, at least connect with it and run with it in some way, as they perceive it.
Great take on the prompt!
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August 14, 2018 at 6:50 pm
Thanks Lillian!😊
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August 14, 2018 at 4:02 pm
I love this piece
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August 14, 2018 at 6:49 pm
Thank you 😊
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August 14, 2018 at 5:59 pm
I love ‘discerning spirit’!
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August 14, 2018 at 6:48 pm
Thanks Linda!
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August 14, 2018 at 6:52 pm
🙂
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August 14, 2018 at 7:47 pm
I like “the invisible cloak of metaphors”.
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August 14, 2018 at 10:24 pm
Thank you!
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August 14, 2018 at 8:30 pm
Spoken from the creative heart of a true poet!
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August 14, 2018 at 10:20 pm
Aww thanks Carrie!🙏🏾
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August 15, 2018 at 6:15 am
kaykuala
they often arrive
wearing the invisible
cloak of metaphors
That is the beauty of poems. It is able to present itself as little gems that are shrouded with lots of possibilities which
will make them most interesting
Hank
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August 15, 2018 at 6:40 pm
Absolutely! Thank you for reading 😊
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August 18, 2018 at 4:28 pm
This has some symmetry with De’s WhimsyGizmo poem for this prompt, the poem as a puzzle box, and in our poem the mind as a box as well. This is a nice little Ars Poetica, but about the art of reading rather than writing poetry. Some poems are obscure, like a painting, or a sunset, those are things that are not expository, but can still contain truth or beauty. The poet writes one thing, but the other participant is the reader, who brings other levels of interpretation and emotion to the poem, thus it can be a new poem each time, an infinite layering of boxes from one little write. I don’t think there is one way “to get” some poems, and that is part of the beauty. Other poems are more direct, other types of literature like novels, flesh out stories and lives, expository essays make a point, but poems can have aspects of all of those, but their main gist is in how they feel, and that is as varied as the course of a moonbeam. That is the point of your quadrille, which is nicely antithetical, they carry keys of truth, but they are often cloaked – but that very fact may be partially why they reveal depth of FEELING and yearnings of the HEART! (that is it zactly girl). So well done.
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August 18, 2018 at 5:55 pm
Thanks Lona, I’m honoured that you’ve taken so much time to give this insight- much appreciated ❤️
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August 18, 2018 at 6:23 pm
A pleasure, but I think Laura said what I said a lot better, 😉. Thanks 💜
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August 18, 2018 at 8:13 pm
😊
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August 18, 2018 at 9:13 pm
Reblogged this on TRUMPET and commented:
Well said!
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August 19, 2018 at 8:59 am
Thanks Julz!
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