“I’m quite tired of beating myself up to write. I think I’ll start letting the words slip out like a tired child. “Can I have a piece of pie” he asks, and then he’s asleep back on the cusp of the moon.” ~ Jim Harrison from Songs of Unreason
My mum gave me a bag of sweets
I still have them with me
I look up to see to see two other kids
-two plus me make three
I offer them hard-boiled sweets
they said, ‘No, thank you-
too much like reality’
I want to eat a Snicker bar
but I’ll wait for mum so we can
both snicker through it
I offer them Mars bars
‘Thank you’, they say,
‘at least space travel’s allowed in here’
Too soon, we’re all back to earth
back in our cage
We sigh…..saying nothing
I miss my mum and
I know they miss their parents too
I’ve still got Love Hearts at the bottom
of my bag
I’ll save them for mum
then we’ll suck on them…together
‘Mum…where are you?’
©Vivian Zems
Nearly 2,000 children have been separated from their parents at the border between mid-April and the end of May.
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June 19, 2018 at 7:01 pm
Stunning use of the surreal!
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June 19, 2018 at 8:27 pm
AAA (Amazing as always)
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June 20, 2018 at 1:43 am
Aww, thank you!😊
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June 20, 2018 at 8:23 am
Welcome
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June 19, 2018 at 10:29 pm
Very open and transparent! A loving write! ❤
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June 20, 2018 at 1:39 am
Thank you!😊
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June 19, 2018 at 10:36 pm
Wonderful, Vivian. This is a topic that is rightfully on most people’s minds now.
I love the child’s eye view (and chocolate).
It made me think of this.
https://www.huffingtonpost.com/entry/holocaust-survivor-shares-amazing-story-of-kindness-in-a-concentration-camp_us_560e94bfe4b0768127019f17
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June 20, 2018 at 1:39 am
Thank you 😊! And the link…. amazing!
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June 20, 2018 at 11:43 am
You’re welcome. I thought you’d appreciate it, if you hadn’t seen it before.
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June 20, 2018 at 1:48 am
A brilliant expose incapsulated in so few lines!
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June 20, 2018 at 12:46 pm
Thank you Frank! 🙂
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June 20, 2018 at 4:42 pm
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June 20, 2018 at 3:29 pm
“I offer them hard-boiled sweets / they said, ‘No, thank you- / too much like reality’” — great. And the space travel of the Mars bar. Then landing the whole thing with the love hearts. Perfect.
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June 20, 2018 at 5:33 pm
Thank you!
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