We
tend to
hear the things
we want to hear
completing the narratives in our heads
-unwilling to consider other tales
for mortal fear
of showing
glaring
truth
©Vivian Zems
(#Tetractys)
The tetractys was invented by Ray Stebbings and is a five-line poem with 20 total syllables, in a lovely and balanced arrangement, like this: 1–2–3–4–10
June 10, 2018 at 12:36 am
well done Viv!
funny how “omission” of words and inclusion of others, can really impact ideas and sentiments!
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June 10, 2018 at 2:01 am
Very powerful Vivian! Great work!
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June 10, 2018 at 2:27 am
Well done, V!
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June 10, 2018 at 4:12 am
Be
Wary
When the mind
Fills in the blanks
One gets what he wants but not what he needs
..
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June 12, 2018 at 12:30 am
Perfect, Jim!
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June 10, 2018 at 4:17 am
do you mean “tend to” ? And this is very true in many cases.
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June 12, 2018 at 12:29 am
Corrected it way later…thanks for spotting it 🙂
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June 10, 2018 at 2:34 pm
Truth!!!
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June 10, 2018 at 2:37 pm
Words of wisdom!
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June 10, 2018 at 4:11 pm
Yes… too often we just tend to assume things.
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June 12, 2018 at 12:25 am
Our own narrative is more familiar.
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June 10, 2018 at 9:32 pm
You said a mouthful girlfriend
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June 12, 2018 at 12:22 am
Thank you! 🙂
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June 10, 2018 at 9:32 pm
These are hard times we live in, best not to assume! (my first-born son’s name is Louis)
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June 12, 2018 at 12:22 am
Absolutely!
Lol!…as is my son’s! A great name 🙂
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June 11, 2018 at 1:16 am
Wow! Love this, Vivian.
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June 11, 2018 at 7:38 am
Thank you 😊
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June 11, 2018 at 8:25 am
Yes, often the case.
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June 11, 2018 at 6:22 pm
Indeed!
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