“Her nights are full of the red teeth of death”
from Life / Dead Man’s Float
In pulpal chambers
filled with pain and anger
Death rages in agony
-of which she finds funny
“I’ll trade you,”she says
“3 root canals for more years”
“Anything!”he yells
dissolving in throbbing tears
She drills into roots
Not fearing lawsuits
She crowns him with pearly caps
masking the crimson fear of Death’s trap
Death turns to glower
(as she says)
“Hope you like your makeover!”
So when next you see death
within a mile
The only thing you’ll observe
is his winning smile!
©Vivian Zems
Day 6 of Jilly’s “28 Days of Unreason”
June 6, 2018 at 9:44 pm
BRAVO!!!!! Standing Ovation!!! This just makes my day! The whole post is a riot. Thank you writing and sharing this. (Still laughing)
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June 6, 2018 at 9:46 pm
Thanks Jilly! A dentist and red teeth…? Irresistible ❤️
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June 6, 2018 at 9:50 pm
Which is scarier? Death or the root canal? Too amazingly funny. Too painful.
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June 7, 2018 at 1:15 pm
Lol! Thanks 😀
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June 6, 2018 at 9:50 pm
Hahahahaha. So funn!
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June 7, 2018 at 10:11 am
Thank you!
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June 6, 2018 at 9:50 pm
That was supposed to be funny. 🙂
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June 6, 2018 at 10:36 pm
Had a check up today, so this really resonated. Luckily my dentist is not an immortal psychopath! 😁😁😁😆
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June 7, 2018 at 10:11 am
Lol! Thank goodness!
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June 6, 2018 at 11:56 pm
“I’ll trade you,”she says
“3 root canals for more years” — LOL! That’s great!
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June 7, 2018 at 10:10 am
She got more years to boot👍🏽
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