Hedge 55– a poem in 55 words
Vivian Zems
Mum, author and dentist is how I describe myself. I love creating pictures from words. Sometimes a painter, other times a weaver- words are my tool; trying to create something beautiful. When I was nine, my dad introduced me to audio books. I was hooked. With his guidance, I fell into a world where words became life simply by weaving them together. So here I am, living out my passion- reading and writing! Enjoy the ride with me 😁😁
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Smell The Coffee 
June 1, 2018 at 9:54 am
Reblogged this on Mihranpiano and commented:
Ouch!…or Maybe Not – so true lines!!!
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June 1, 2018 at 12:45 pm
Thank you Mihran!😀
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June 1, 2018 at 2:49 pm
This pretty well sums it all up, doesn’t it? Yet we often are prompted to launch ourselves into freefall anyway, and live with the injuries. (And oddly enough, they sometimes turn out to heal us.) I love your presentation,too, but your clear-eyed self-analysis even more. Please have the most kickass of weekends, my dear.
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June 1, 2018 at 6:03 pm
Thanks J! I appreciate your comments… you have a great weekend too!
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June 1, 2018 at 4:16 pm
Fuck this shit, I’m taking the stairs back to the snack bar! 😉
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June 1, 2018 at 5:55 pm
🤣🤣🤣
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June 1, 2018 at 6:32 pm
and who makes the promise?
that’s what I wanna know ….
interesting and straight-up 55 this week Viv – has a certain resonance for both sound and bite …. 🙂
and I’m walking with Coal back down the trail – I’ve got the munchies 😉
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June 2, 2018 at 12:52 am
Who indeed makes the promise? For we too make the same promise. ‘‘Tis the mystery of love. Thanks Pat! Happy feeding!
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June 1, 2018 at 8:36 pm
Free falling right now, hoping the landing isn’t too hard. I too hate heights!
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June 2, 2018 at 12:50 am
There’s always hope 😊- safe landings!
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June 2, 2018 at 4:00 pm
An excellent analogy, and beautifully presented.
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June 2, 2018 at 4:25 pm
Thanks, Kerry!
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June 2, 2018 at 9:52 pm
I like this Vivian, it says all of the perils of falling in love.
Me, I am frightened of unsafe heights, or what I regard as unsafe, but not bothered by others – a bit like falling in love…
Of love – I love it, but do remember all those broken bones when falling (and not being caught) in my younger years…
Anna :o]
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June 2, 2018 at 10:10 pm
A risk all around, Anna😀 Thank you for commenting!
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June 5, 2018 at 12:06 pm
Just listened to your work put to music enjoyed the work of too talented artists combining. Chris.
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June 5, 2018 at 6:54 pm
Thank you, Chris for your kind thoughts ☺️
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