If you could be brave enough
to see the promised land
If you would lay down your defenses
enough to let all others inIf you could stay true to yourself;
staying your hands from darkness –
The heavens will light up every room
in your mindYou will be imbued with all wisdom
and your star will rise even as far as the heavens
Come- lean with me on this balcony
Let’s take in the view
After all – all these promises are free
©Vivian Zems
Sue Vincent‘s #Writephoto
May 4, 2018 at 9:28 am
Nice thoughts!
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May 4, 2018 at 6:46 pm
Thank you😊
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May 4, 2018 at 11:11 am
A very enjoyable and spiritual poem. A good first read for my day. Have a good day and weekend Vivian. Thanks for an uplifting post. ☺❤
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May 4, 2018 at 6:44 pm
Thanks Walt! Have a great weekend 😊
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May 4, 2018 at 10:20 pm
You’re welcome! You too! ☺
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May 5, 2018 at 3:06 pm
😊
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May 5, 2018 at 11:19 am
Woah, lovely last line.
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May 5, 2018 at 2:49 pm
Thank you!
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May 8, 2018 at 10:14 am
Nice composition!! Good work Vivian
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May 8, 2018 at 9:04 pm
Thank you😊
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May 24, 2018 at 6:27 am
you’re welcome Vivian.. see you around 🙂
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May 24, 2018 at 1:28 pm
🙂
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May 8, 2018 at 10:33 am
Beautiful!
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May 10, 2018 at 2:04 pm
Thanks 😊
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May 10, 2018 at 6:21 pm
😇
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May 8, 2018 at 8:44 pm
Love this one, Vivian.
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May 8, 2018 at 11:15 pm
Thanks, Sue!
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