Lauren and Jack encouraged Rebecca as Lauren clicked away. Rebecca had her back to the beautiful scenery and posed for the camera- flicking her hair provocatively…..
Finish the story (Re-named- The Perfect Angle) in Tales in Teacups
©Vivian Zems
Vivian Zems
Mum, author and dentist is how I describe myself. I love creating pictures from words. Sometimes a painter, other times a weaver- words are my tool; trying to create something beautiful. When I was nine, my dad introduced me to audio books. I was hooked. With his guidance, I fell into a world where words became life simply by weaving them together. So here I am, living out my passion- reading and writing! Enjoy the ride with me 😁😁
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Smell The Coffee 
April 27, 2018 at 10:06 am
You can’t do nuthin’ without leaving an electronic trace somewhere. Nice one, Vivien
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April 27, 2018 at 1:40 pm
Thanks Neil! You’re so right… you can’t!
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April 27, 2018 at 10:53 am
Won’t take long before the police stumble across that evidence…
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April 27, 2018 at 1:37 pm
Thought so too! I got the idea after stumbling across pics from 2014 on google photos! 🙂
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April 27, 2018 at 1:42 pm
Be sure your sins will find you out. And with friends like that who needs enemies? Good story.
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April 27, 2018 at 1:44 pm
Indeed… people sometimes think themselves clever….Thank you!
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April 27, 2018 at 2:50 pm
Well, I’d say they deserve to get caught! Enjoyed your story.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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April 27, 2018 at 11:37 pm
Thanks, Susan!
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April 27, 2018 at 8:38 pm
I hope Rebecca has had a soft landing. Revenge can be sweet. a fun read.
the trouble is they need to have her phone and password to get on the cloud – am I being pedantic? Sorry.
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April 27, 2018 at 10:22 pm
Now, that would be good – if she were still alive. Cloud storage…the police can retrieve that easily from any computer..a little geeky stuff..but it works!
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April 27, 2018 at 10:04 pm
Omg! Didn’t see that coming!👍
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April 27, 2018 at 10:19 pm
Lol!
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April 28, 2018 at 12:21 am
Hope they get caught. Great story.
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April 28, 2018 at 1:56 am
They’ll have a long time to think about the cloud when they’re in the clink 🙂
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April 30, 2018 at 4:17 am
Exactly!
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April 28, 2018 at 9:58 am
Very clever write. Enjoyed this read.
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April 29, 2018 at 6:05 am
Thank you!:)
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April 28, 2018 at 12:35 pm
Dear Vivian,
Looks like they won’t be laughing for long.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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April 29, 2018 at 6:05 am
Thank you Rochelle!
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April 28, 2018 at 3:17 pm
It’s always a matter of time. Why, oh why do people never look behind them before taking that step?
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April 28, 2018 at 5:55 pm
I know! It’s always the way. Thanks for reading, Dale. How’s the house move?
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April 29, 2018 at 5:25 pm
Well.. Our first visit is today at 4PM (we had one schedule for 2 but she cancelled…) Fingers crossed!
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April 30, 2018 at 3:54 am
All the best!
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April 30, 2018 at 3:57 am
Thanks!!
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May 1, 2018 at 7:51 am
🙂
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April 28, 2018 at 10:31 pm
Curses! Foiled again!
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April 30, 2018 at 4:16 am
Lol!
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April 29, 2018 at 12:46 am
Clever twist to the story. When I was a kid an incident similar to this happened at the touristy hill town I was staying in. The honeymooners were taking photos and the husband intent on getting the wife to pose was directing her – “turn this way, a little back”. Till she went over. Never knew what happened in the end, murder or accident? But then those were the pre-icloud days.
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April 30, 2018 at 4:15 am
I heard about that….it was actually what inspired me to write this. It’s very hard to prove murder in such a case. Thanks for reading 🙂
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April 29, 2018 at 6:16 am
A very enjoyable read 🙂
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April 30, 2018 at 4:13 am
Thanks Dahlia!
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April 29, 2018 at 9:39 am
Oh yes, cloud storage. Great final line. Cloud storage could become the bane of many a criminal.
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April 29, 2018 at 2:18 pm
It already is! Someone nicked my iPad a few years ago. After the police report..went on iCloud and voila! Selfies, pics of house/dog/cat/mum/dad…etc…’twas one of the kid’s classmates!!
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April 29, 2018 at 2:27 pm
That’s great 😊 not that it was one of the classmates but how you got it back.
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April 30, 2018 at 4:04 am
🙂
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April 29, 2018 at 4:40 pm
That’s a neat twist at the end!
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April 30, 2018 at 4:03 am
Thanks Penny 🙂
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April 29, 2018 at 5:16 pm
These days there’s always a trail… and do not forget the searches they had made before it happened…
“How to stage an accident…”
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April 30, 2018 at 3:55 am
Exactly!
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April 29, 2018 at 9:09 pm
Shouldn’t hae dunnit!
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April 30, 2018 at 3:15 am
Precisely!
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