It’s pure ecstasy
to run free within my mind
shutting out white noise
side-stepping anger’s pot-holes
steering my soul heaven-ward
©Vivian Zems
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It’s pure ecstasy
to run free within my mind
shutting out white noise
side-stepping anger’s pot-holes
steering my soul heaven-ward
©Vivian Zems
Smell The Coffee 
March 21, 2018 at 9:16 pm
Vivian! You have the gift, for sure. I love this Tanka. Well done! ❤
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March 22, 2018 at 12:09 am
Thanks, Colleen 🙂
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March 22, 2018 at 6:07 pm
“side-stepping anger’s pot-holes” Beautiful use of words! ☺❤
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March 22, 2018 at 7:15 pm
Thank you 🙂
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March 22, 2018 at 9:48 pm
You’re welcome ☺
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March 22, 2018 at 7:25 pm
Anger can consume you… a good idea to avoid it…
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March 23, 2018 at 9:05 am
Definitely!
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March 22, 2018 at 7:46 pm
I love the way short forms force thought into tiny packages that explode when you read them. This one expresses much in few words. Well done!
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March 23, 2018 at 9:04 am
Thank you… you’re right- it sure focuses the mind 🙂
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March 22, 2018 at 8:35 pm
“side-stepping anger’s pot-holes
steering my soul heaven-ward”
I love your alliterative flourishes on this tanka’s closing lines! Cool write!
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March 22, 2018 at 8:38 pm
Wonderful, such freedom. I loved the picture too. XX
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March 23, 2018 at 9:04 am
Thanks, Alison!
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March 22, 2018 at 10:23 pm
Absolutely lovely!
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March 23, 2018 at 9:00 am
Thanks, Jo!
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March 22, 2018 at 11:17 pm
Lovely Vivian!
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March 23, 2018 at 9:00 am
Thanks, Linda 🙂
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March 23, 2018 at 12:38 am
Good to shut off that white noise and reflect inwards ~
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March 23, 2018 at 8:05 am
Works a treat!
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March 23, 2018 at 1:21 am
Nice line: “side-stepping anger’s pot-holes”
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March 23, 2018 at 8:04 am
Thanks, Frank
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March 23, 2018 at 2:44 am
A wonderful image running free in the mind. Dodging pot hole of words and closing out the world!
dwight
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March 23, 2018 at 8:04 am
I’ve become quite adept at this 🙂
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March 23, 2018 at 9:01 pm
A good feeling, for sure!
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March 23, 2018 at 11:19 pm
Oh definitely…like whistling down the road- as carefree as can be. 🙂
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March 23, 2018 at 11:39 pm
🙂
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March 24, 2018 at 12:51 am
kaykuala
It’s pure ecstasy
to run free within my mind
Freedom of thoughts can be most desired which is an outcome of great blessings
Hank
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March 24, 2018 at 9:41 pm
Haha Happy spring… sure go ahead… tiptoe through the Tulips 🙂 ❤
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March 25, 2018 at 8:05 am
Lol!….thank you😊
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