The Mission: revise these 2 haikus by Matsuo Basho
old pond
a frog jumps in
sound of water
© Basho (Tr. Chèvrefeuille)
crouching frog
a lily pad skims past
plop!©Vivian Zems
autumn evening;
a crow perched
on a withered bough
© Basho (Tr. R. H. Blyth)
a bough bows
a crow caws
autumn’s sunset reigns©Vivian Zems
March 4, 2018 at 7:47 pm
Very nice. I love the “plop”!
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March 5, 2018 at 1:57 am
Thank you 🙂
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March 6, 2018 at 3:26 am
Well done! These are great ☺
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March 6, 2018 at 3:17 pm
Thanks, Walt!
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March 7, 2018 at 7:53 pm
You did a great job on this task Vivian, I like that “plop” …
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March 7, 2018 at 8:06 pm
Thanks Kristjaan😊
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