Dear Viv,
Try not to scream when you read this
It’s from future-you to present-me
Take heed, these words-do not dismiss
Pay close attention-so your eyes see
In three days you will play the lottery
The numbers you use will secure a win
Joy will fill you and our family
But this win will surely lead to tragedy
Keep just a tenth-pay all your bills
Give the rest away-let the money sail
Trust me in this- forfeit all the thrills
I write you with love as I languish in jail
©Vivian Zems
dVerse Poets Pub- Meet The Bar with a letter
The form of writing a letter to someone, real or imaginary is one of the oldest form of poetry dating back to Horace and Ovid and has been used throughout the history.
March 2, 2018 at 10:07 pm
Too bad on that windfall ending in a tragic situation. I do like the idea of writing from the future to the present me Viv~
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March 2, 2018 at 10:10 pm
Thanks Grace😊 My muse thought it was a good idea…Who am I to argue? 😂
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March 3, 2018 at 4:30 am
I take it you didn’t heed your own advice. ;o)
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March 3, 2018 at 7:09 am
Lol! 2 more days to go before this lottery ‘game’ 🙂
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March 3, 2018 at 5:41 pm
Great idea to write to yourself from the future. If only we could see ahead. Good luck with the lottery! (I assume you took the risk 😉
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March 3, 2018 at 5:50 pm
Thanks Mish!… no way, I don’t even play! 🙂 🙂
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March 3, 2018 at 5:58 pm
Great stuff! Good ideA
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March 3, 2018 at 9:42 pm
I have never thought that wealth from lottery would bring joy… pay the bills should be more than enough…
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March 3, 2018 at 11:15 pm
I thought there was sense in that letter somehow…:)
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March 4, 2018 at 1:21 am
I love the idea of writing to yourself as a future-you. I always read about how unhappy big winners become, and how their lives unravel.
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March 4, 2018 at 9:29 am
IKR? So future me might be on to something there😓
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March 5, 2018 at 1:33 am
Decidedly!
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March 6, 2018 at 3:18 pm
LOL!
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March 4, 2018 at 2:24 am
…it would be hard to listen to your advice – Yet pay the bills and keep only a tenth… well – that does sound good to me right now I must be honest.
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March 4, 2018 at 9:26 am
Yes, it sounds like good advice…😊
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