Fragile eyelashes flicker
like whispering butterflies
as I sway on the veranda
to the close beat of my heart’s cantatapupils dilate at your image
though unknown is your visage
sultry glances I throw
never for you to know
in this moment of tangency
©Vivian Zems
Smell The Coffee 
February 19, 2018 at 8:08 pm
I had to use a lot more words to be able to include the whole wordle. I admire your ability to use them all in so few.
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February 19, 2018 at 8:10 pm
Different styles. Yours needed the words. ..or we wouldn’t have had a good story!
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February 19, 2018 at 8:12 pm
That’s true. I probably haven’t written a poem in over forty years.
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February 19, 2018 at 8:13 pm
Your talent is in the tale….I believe.
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February 19, 2018 at 8:13 pm
I’d have to agree with that, Vivian. Thanks.
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February 19, 2018 at 8:13 pm
😊
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February 19, 2018 at 8:10 pm
Thank you😊
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February 19, 2018 at 8:46 pm
Clever use of the words Vivian, and I do like your conclusion.
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February 19, 2018 at 10:03 pm
Thanks😊😊
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February 19, 2018 at 11:18 pm
Love the’ heart’s cantata’. Brevity is best.Excellent use of the words. A very nice.love poem.
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February 20, 2018 at 12:28 am
Thank you, Rall! 🙂
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February 22, 2018 at 10:27 am
So much said in few lines. Very well expressed 🙂
Cheers
MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts
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February 22, 2018 at 10:39 am
Thank you 🙂
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