first light
brimming well lies silent
my thirst screams
©Vivian Zems
Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Weekend Meditation #20
Chiyo-ni (Kaga no Chiyo) was a Japanese poet of the Edo period, widely regarded as one of the greatest poets of haiku. We attempt to revise her famous haiku:
morning glory!
the well bucket-entangled,
I ask for water© Chiyo-Ni
February 19, 2018 at 3:54 am
I am suddenly thirsty and want to see morning glories.
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February 19, 2018 at 6:28 pm
A nice revision Vivian.
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February 19, 2018 at 7:43 pm
Thank you! 😊
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