A day at the circus
entrance is free
standing room only
so bad-we can’t seeI carve a fence hole
and peer within
space for four eyes to hold
I draw mum closer to meour eyes pull to see
the full circus on display
loving just my mum and me
out enjoying her birthday
©Vivian Zems
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February 3, 2018 at 3:17 pm
Nothing wrong with that. As long as it is a circus lol. Enjoyed the poem very much.
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February 3, 2018 at 4:33 pm
Aw! What a sweet son. You capture that togetherness so well.
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February 4, 2018 at 12:55 am
Thanks Kerry! 🙂
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February 3, 2018 at 4:39 pm
That’s so sweet😊
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February 4, 2018 at 12:54 am
Thanks, Namratha 🙂
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February 3, 2018 at 5:17 pm
A sweet day together…
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February 4, 2018 at 12:53 am
It sure is 🙂
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February 3, 2018 at 5:33 pm
That’s the way to enjoy it … what’s better than a circus for two?
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February 4, 2018 at 12:53 am
Two seats would be perfect…but hey, I won’t complain 🙂
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February 3, 2018 at 5:49 pm
This is a really sweet response to the picture prompt, Vivian 💕❤️
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February 4, 2018 at 12:52 am
Thank you! 🙂
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February 3, 2018 at 8:16 pm
Nice! And life often feels like a circus all by itself….
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February 4, 2018 at 12:50 am
Thank you! 🙂 It sure does!
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February 3, 2018 at 10:46 pm
A very sweet image. Thanks. k.
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February 4, 2018 at 12:50 am
Thank you! 🙂
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February 4, 2018 at 1:19 am
This is a happy poem. A simple outing of mother and son.
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February 4, 2018 at 10:40 am
Indeed! Thanks for having a read 🙂
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February 4, 2018 at 2:18 am
That has got to be one of the sweetest presents a son would give his mother. 🙂
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February 4, 2018 at 10:41 am
Yes,… I think so too 🙂
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February 4, 2018 at 2:30 am
Having peeked through fences as a kid this resonates with me as well especially as my own mother loved to take me on walks to discover things in the woods and by the streams.
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February 4, 2018 at 10:41 am
Awww…..that’s so sweet 🙂
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February 4, 2018 at 6:01 pm
What a wonderful loving and happy poem. this is such a great response to the prompt – a loving son and a happy mother. Thank you.
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February 5, 2018 at 12:15 am
I went for warm fuzzy feelings. Thanks, Toni😊
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February 4, 2018 at 6:17 pm
I like that you injected some positive energy.
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February 5, 2018 at 12:14 am
Thank you!😊
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February 4, 2018 at 10:38 pm
This is cute. When it’s mom’s birthday you find a way.
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February 5, 2018 at 12:14 am
Yes , one must!😊
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February 5, 2018 at 2:39 am
Well done 😊💛
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February 5, 2018 at 7:29 am
Thanks Walt!😊
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February 5, 2018 at 10:52 am
You’re welcome ☺
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February 5, 2018 at 5:47 pm
Love the sweetness of your poem ….
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