Patient number three
we’ll call him Mr X
saunters into surgery
all smiles and no vexeyes twinkle with mirth
emanating power and swagger
my mission-foremost and first
to fix his niggling molarhe breaks out in song
chilled demeanour – nothing wrong
I hum along
even as he goes numbregaling me with stories
of a humorous youth
Mr X makes my day brighter
while I fill his toothbetwixt drilling and filling
his muffled speech streaming
Mr X makes my day brighter
spreading joy-face beaminga rare gift, has Mr X
to see joy amidst pain
a rare gem, is Mr X
such talent to entertainI bid him farewell
sadly breaking the spell
now grinning while filling
my day takes on new meaning
©Vivian Zems
Isadora hosts Real Toads today with the following challenge:
Eulogy for a Stranger
Pick one stranger you encounter today and write their eulogy. Imagine their triumphs, the funny little stories that you would want to share with their family and friends. The defining moments that you want to highlight based on only your initial assessment.
Author’s Note: Mr X is a fictitious character. (I can’t really write about any of my patients!).
February 1, 2018 at 8:39 pm
I did smile as I read this, we all have opinions about dentists I have to say….a singing one must be a treat….I’m sure you are a compassionate operator, much loved by your patients…
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February 1, 2018 at 9:07 pm
Thanks Michael😊 I hope so!
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February 2, 2018 at 2:56 am
sounds like he didn’t die on the dentist table 🙂 … that’s MY fear:)
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February 2, 2018 at 6:43 pm
😂😂- all you need is a happy dentist😊
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February 2, 2018 at 4:38 am
Hiya, Isadora from real toads. I am not sure if word press is registering my name. I really like your take on the eulogy challenge. This was fun and the sing-songyness brought a smile. Thanks so much for playing!
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February 2, 2018 at 6:41 pm
My pleasure 😊. And thanks for the prompt!
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February 2, 2018 at 5:55 am
I hum along even as he goes numb…for some reason that makes me smile. I’ll take a happy duet of dentist and patient any day.
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February 2, 2018 at 6:44 pm
Thanks, Susie😊
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February 2, 2018 at 8:11 pm
Just the thought of trying to talk while having a filling made me laugh… usually my dentist does all the talking and I answer something like this: Ghhaaw, gooogahh
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February 3, 2018 at 1:40 pm
Your poem made me smile, Viv, especially the lines:
‘he breaks out in song
chilled demeanour – nothing wrong
I hum along
even as he goes numb’.
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February 3, 2018 at 3:12 pm
Thanks, Kim!😊
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February 4, 2018 at 2:57 am
I’ve only ever felt comfortable with male dentists, because the first dentist I ever had was male and really nice. But I swear, you’d be the only female dentist I’d go see willingly.
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February 4, 2018 at 10:43 am
LOL!!!!
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