Michael settled himself into the car. As the ride began, his car spun lazily from side to side. That’s when he saw her…
Finish the story in Tales in Teacups
©Vivian Zems
Friday Fiction with Rochelle Wisoff
PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll
Michael settled himself into the car. As the ride began, his car spun lazily from side to side. That’s when he saw her…
Finish the story in Tales in Teacups
©Vivian Zems
Friday Fiction with Rochelle Wisoff
PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll
Mum, author and dentist is how I describe myself. I love creating pictures from words. Sometimes a painter, other times a weaver- words are my tool; trying to create something beautiful. When I was nine, my dad introduced me to audio books. I was hooked. With his guidance, I fell into a world where words became life simply by weaving them together. So here I am, living out my passion- reading and writing! Enjoy the ride with me 😁😁
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January 18, 2018 at 5:10 am
Oh dear, all that rage for nothing.
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January 19, 2018 at 9:53 am
Tee- hee!
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January 18, 2018 at 7:25 am
Ha ha ha ha. Loved the ‘stopped to puke’ part…and the ending of course!
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January 18, 2018 at 8:44 am
😂😂-he was a basket case! Thanks!
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January 18, 2018 at 10:55 am
I couldn’t help smiling at that image you conjured up.
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January 19, 2018 at 1:04 am
Thanks, Sandra! 🙂
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January 18, 2018 at 12:00 pm
Oh no! Hope he went back on the ride to enjoy it properly 🙂
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January 19, 2018 at 1:04 am
Somehow, I think he might just want to sit down and think…:)
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January 18, 2018 at 3:10 pm
That’s brilliant! Thanks for the grin.
Click to read my FriFic!
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January 18, 2018 at 4:05 pm
My pleasure 😆
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January 18, 2018 at 3:13 pm
Oh no! I wasn’t expecting that (but it made me laugh).
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January 18, 2018 at 4:05 pm
😆😆
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January 18, 2018 at 4:54 pm
My morning chuckle.😄 Poor guy —all that anguish in vain. Maybe he needs new glasses?
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January 19, 2018 at 1:03 am
I think so! 🙂 🙂
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January 18, 2018 at 4:55 pm
That’s a young man suffering from TMT (Too Much Testosterone)!
Nice whimsical story, Vivian
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January 19, 2018 at 1:03 am
Thank you 🙂 🙂
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January 18, 2018 at 6:11 pm
Dear Vivian,
Michael’s going to have a lot of explaining to do. .Very funny and well written piece. I enjoyed the ride.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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January 19, 2018 at 1:02 am
Thanks, Rochelle! 🙂
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January 19, 2018 at 4:09 am
Nice twist, V! I did not see that one coming.
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January 19, 2018 at 9:49 am
Thanks J! How’s the new year treating you? Started on your travels yet? 🙂 🙂
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January 20, 2018 at 3:53 am
Too early to tell. It still thinks it’s 2017. Ask me again next week.
Travel hopefully starts in the spring. 🙂Fingers crossed. 😁How are things at your end?
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January 20, 2018 at 10:49 am
Work, work, work….! But good all the same 🙂
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January 21, 2018 at 7:29 pm
I always tell myself that’s a good thing all that work. 😁 You know, the devil makes work for idle hands (and minds) and all that. Much as I (would have) hated to live in Victorian times, I love using their sayings.
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January 21, 2018 at 10:08 pm
🙂 🙂
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January 19, 2018 at 11:50 am
The moral of the story – never trust perceived canoodling! 😊
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January 19, 2018 at 7:38 pm
Precisely!
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January 19, 2018 at 2:13 pm
Hahahaha. Great write and twist.🙂
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January 19, 2018 at 7:36 pm
Thank you!😊
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January 19, 2018 at 8:12 pm
Haha! Serves him right to have to puke before making an ass of himself. Methinks Natalie should think about whether or not she wants such a jealous beau…
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January 20, 2018 at 10:54 am
Methinks the same! 🙂 🙂
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January 19, 2018 at 9:45 pm
I imagine Natalie coming looking for him seeing him making his performance.
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January 20, 2018 at 10:52 am
He’d better make some sort of excuse, lest she thinks less of him! 🙂
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January 21, 2018 at 4:42 pm
That was so funny. ,,, it was a great surprise ending.
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January 21, 2018 at 6:12 pm
Thanks Dan!
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January 22, 2018 at 8:39 pm
oops! well, when you’re spinning round that fast your eyesight is bound to be a bit off 🙂 thanks for the laugh
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January 22, 2018 at 10:10 pm
My pleasure! Methinks he’s insecure.
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February 23, 2018 at 3:54 pm
We are to often blinded by what we want to see.
Mistakes… happen. 😉
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February 23, 2018 at 6:09 pm
So true.
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