Michael settled himself into the car. As the ride began, his car spun lazily from side to side. That’s when he saw her…
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January 18, 2018 at 5:10 am
Oh dear, all that rage for nothing.
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January 19, 2018 at 9:53 am
Tee- hee!
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January 18, 2018 at 7:25 am
Ha ha ha ha. Loved the ‘stopped to puke’ part…and the ending of course!
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January 18, 2018 at 8:44 am
😂😂-he was a basket case! Thanks!
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January 18, 2018 at 10:55 am
I couldn’t help smiling at that image you conjured up.
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January 19, 2018 at 1:04 am
Thanks, Sandra! 🙂
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January 18, 2018 at 12:00 pm
Oh no! Hope he went back on the ride to enjoy it properly 🙂
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January 19, 2018 at 1:04 am
Somehow, I think he might just want to sit down and think…:)
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January 18, 2018 at 3:10 pm
That’s brilliant! Thanks for the grin.
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January 18, 2018 at 4:05 pm
My pleasure 😆
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January 18, 2018 at 3:13 pm
Oh no! I wasn’t expecting that (but it made me laugh).
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January 18, 2018 at 4:05 pm
😆😆
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January 18, 2018 at 4:54 pm
My morning chuckle.😄 Poor guy —all that anguish in vain. Maybe he needs new glasses?
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January 19, 2018 at 1:03 am
I think so! 🙂 🙂
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January 18, 2018 at 4:55 pm
That’s a young man suffering from TMT (Too Much Testosterone)!
Nice whimsical story, Vivian
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January 19, 2018 at 1:03 am
Thank you 🙂 🙂
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January 18, 2018 at 6:11 pm
Dear Vivian,
Michael’s going to have a lot of explaining to do. .Very funny and well written piece. I enjoyed the ride.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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January 19, 2018 at 1:02 am
Thanks, Rochelle! 🙂
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January 19, 2018 at 4:09 am
Nice twist, V! I did not see that one coming.
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January 19, 2018 at 9:49 am
Thanks J! How’s the new year treating you? Started on your travels yet? 🙂 🙂
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January 20, 2018 at 3:53 am
Too early to tell. It still thinks it’s 2017. Ask me again next week.
Travel hopefully starts in the spring. 🙂Fingers crossed. 😁How are things at your end?
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January 20, 2018 at 10:49 am
Work, work, work….! But good all the same 🙂
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January 21, 2018 at 7:29 pm
I always tell myself that’s a good thing all that work. 😁 You know, the devil makes work for idle hands (and minds) and all that. Much as I (would have) hated to live in Victorian times, I love using their sayings.
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January 21, 2018 at 10:08 pm
🙂 🙂
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January 19, 2018 at 11:50 am
The moral of the story – never trust perceived canoodling! 😊
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January 19, 2018 at 7:38 pm
Precisely!
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January 19, 2018 at 2:13 pm
Hahahaha. Great write and twist.🙂
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January 19, 2018 at 7:36 pm
Thank you!😊
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January 19, 2018 at 8:12 pm
Haha! Serves him right to have to puke before making an ass of himself. Methinks Natalie should think about whether or not she wants such a jealous beau…
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January 20, 2018 at 10:54 am
Methinks the same! 🙂 🙂
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January 19, 2018 at 9:45 pm
I imagine Natalie coming looking for him seeing him making his performance.
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January 20, 2018 at 10:52 am
He’d better make some sort of excuse, lest she thinks less of him! 🙂
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January 21, 2018 at 4:42 pm
That was so funny. ,,, it was a great surprise ending.
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January 21, 2018 at 6:12 pm
Thanks Dan!
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January 22, 2018 at 8:39 pm
oops! well, when you’re spinning round that fast your eyesight is bound to be a bit off 🙂 thanks for the laugh
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January 22, 2018 at 10:10 pm
My pleasure! Methinks he’s insecure.
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February 23, 2018 at 3:54 pm
We are to often blinded by what we want to see.
Mistakes… happen. 😉
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February 23, 2018 at 6:09 pm
So true.
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