I liked what I saw
a performance without flaw
so I bought my ticket
a ticket to your showExciting at first
thrills and spills galore
it quenched my thirst
and I hungered for moreBut your show turned sour
becoming darker and darker
Refund? no, keep the money
this show, is no longer funny
©Vivian Zems
Smell The Coffee 
January 4, 2018 at 7:08 pm
Unfortunately, some shows that begin well can’t sustain it. It’s good to know when to leave, yeah?
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January 4, 2018 at 8:27 pm
Been there, definitely bought the wrong ticket. I relate to this poem so much! Smiles.
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January 4, 2018 at 9:12 pm
I never asked for a refund but I most certainly did walk out on the show! Good write!
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January 5, 2018 at 7:42 am
Thank you! It seems pointless asking for a refund while life ticks by.
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January 4, 2018 at 9:38 pm
Sometimes we realize too late and end up lopsided while watching the show. Great write!
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January 5, 2018 at 7:41 am
Thanks Sanaa!😊
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January 5, 2018 at 1:28 am
You nailed it. Happens to many.
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January 5, 2018 at 7:38 am
Aaah….life!😊
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January 5, 2018 at 7:13 am
This reads like a metaphor for life!
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January 5, 2018 at 7:29 am
It sure is!😊
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January 5, 2018 at 9:33 am
I think being stuck in a show can be a nightmare… leave before it’s too late.
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January 5, 2018 at 7:05 pm
👍
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January 5, 2018 at 12:17 pm
An easy read that touched a simple man 🙂 ❤
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January 5, 2018 at 6:59 pm
Thanks, Walt!😊
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