I once had a orange
That was succulent and sweet
It was my own possession
It was mine to keep
It then became sour
And shrivelled
As a dead flower
So I went to take a bite
Of an apple I coveted on sight
And oh my!
What a great delight!
Now I keep this apple
That’s succulent and sweet
It lasts much longer
And it’s mine to keep
©Vivian Zems
December Writing Prompts 11/31
Real Toads ~ fruit
December 12, 2017 at 2:36 am
Nice one! Witty and nice
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December 12, 2017 at 7:16 am
Thanks, Jay!
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December 13, 2017 at 2:13 pm
Fruity…glad sweet followed sour 🙂
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December 14, 2017 at 7:01 pm
Oooh 😀 both oranges and apples are soo feisty on the tongue aren’t they? ❤️ Lovely write! Thank you so much for sharing, Vivian 😀
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December 15, 2017 at 12:45 am
Thanks Sanaa! My pleasure 😊
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December 14, 2017 at 8:21 pm
Nice one, Viv! Don’t let your Christmas orange go to waste!I
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December 15, 2017 at 12:34 am
😊- thanks!
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December 14, 2017 at 10:15 pm
Ha, wise choices, the sweetness over the sour.
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December 14, 2017 at 11:59 pm
Always😉
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December 15, 2017 at 4:02 am
Orange you glad you had an apple to sweeten the deal? Fun poem and full of seasonal treats. Holiday and new years blessings.
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December 16, 2017 at 2:40 pm
Thanks you Toni! Glad you like it 😊
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December 15, 2017 at 5:27 pm
Timing (and choices) are very important when it comes to oranges and apples (and living). Love the playfulness of the tone (and the seriousness of the theme).
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December 16, 2017 at 2:43 pm
Thanks you Magaly! Glad you like it 😊
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December 15, 2017 at 9:29 pm
Nice, Vivian. Your writer had best keep this good apple “till death do us part.”
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December 16, 2017 at 2:25 pm
Absolutely!
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December 15, 2017 at 9:47 pm
Better eat the fruit when they taste good… make the right choices.
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December 16, 2017 at 2:24 pm
So true…
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