She is led back here repeatedly as if drawn by a force. She knows not what she awaits but wait, she does….
Finish the story in Tales in Teacups
©Vivian Zems
Memento mori (Latin: “remember that you have to die”)
Friday Fictioneers with Rochelle Wisoff
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December 8, 2017 at 7:24 pm
When such forces operate… there’s always a reason…
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December 8, 2017 at 7:42 pm
Yes, there is!
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December 8, 2017 at 8:32 pm
That was simply beautiful! Well done for evoking so much in so few words.
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December 8, 2017 at 8:47 pm
Beautifully written Vivian…
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December 9, 2017 at 4:53 am
Awwwe, so poignant and evocative. Loved it.
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December 9, 2017 at 6:11 pm
So sadly beautiful and well written dear friend. It touched my heart. Thank you.
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December 10, 2017 at 9:09 pm
My pleasure!
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December 10, 2017 at 10:18 pm
Awww, bless you, Walt.
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December 9, 2017 at 10:27 pm
Beautifully done.
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December 10, 2017 at 9:06 pm
Thanks you!
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December 10, 2017 at 11:41 am
Dear Vivian,
Poignant and lovely read.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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December 10, 2017 at 8:58 pm
Thanks, Rochelle 🙂
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December 10, 2017 at 8:02 pm
A lovely and sad read… somehow that separation is so powerful
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December 10, 2017 at 8:11 pm
The most powerful thing…
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December 10, 2017 at 9:23 pm
Oh heck! Sad!
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December 11, 2017 at 8:03 am
Yes, so it is!
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December 11, 2017 at 7:03 pm
Such a pleasure to read. Beautifully done, Vivian.
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December 11, 2017 at 7:36 pm
Thanks, Dale😊
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December 12, 2017 at 3:41 pm
What a tender and sensitive ghost story. Nicely done, Vivian.
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December 14, 2017 at 7:59 am
Thanks, Penny!
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