(1)
Curious spirit escaping
Cloaked in dreams to be free
Roaming memory’s lane
Reading the knowledge tree
(2)
Its sojourn is brief
Returning home with glee
Fulfilled with inspiration
Clearing her mind of debris
©Vivian Zems
(#Naani)
The Naani is a four line poem that has 20-25 syllables. The first two lines provide the subject that the next two bring to an interesting close.
November 23, 2017 at 9:24 pm
Knowledge can make you free…
Probably this should not have been linked to the jazz poetry prompt.
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November 23, 2017 at 9:40 pm
Thanks Björn! Added by accident. Hope Amaya deletes it. I added Tugging Notes.
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November 23, 2017 at 9:41 pm
I can delete it 🙂
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November 23, 2017 at 9:41 pm
Please do!
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November 24, 2017 at 12:02 am
curiosity reading the knowledge tree is a great image…thanks for sharing vivian.
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November 24, 2017 at 1:25 am
Immersing oneself in knowledge can be a very soothing pursuit
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November 24, 2017 at 8:48 am
They certainly do!
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November 24, 2017 at 6:13 am
Where is this knowledge tree? I want my mind to be free of debris! This certainly got a laugh from me.
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November 24, 2017 at 8:43 am
Glad you enjoyed it 🙂 🙂
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November 24, 2017 at 7:37 am
This is absolutely exquisite!❤️
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November 24, 2017 at 8:43 am
Thanks, Sanaa 🙂
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November 24, 2017 at 6:24 pm
This sounds very invigorating! An autumnal blast of energy. Yay!
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November 24, 2017 at 6:25 pm
Thanks, Sherry!
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