Mired thoughts
Whirring in her mind
Cascading
Dark abyss
Depression her only friend
When will it all end?By sheer will
Turning her mind off
She rallies
Fighting back
Friendships can come to an end
Time to make new ones(#Shadorma)
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November 16, 2017 at 7:35 pm
We are on the same “thought” page with our Shadormas!
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November 16, 2017 at 8:18 pm
That’s great 😊
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November 16, 2017 at 7:40 pm
well said – great post!!
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November 16, 2017 at 8:18 pm
Thanks 😊
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November 16, 2017 at 7:43 pm
Vivian.. thanks for sharing this.. there is light at the end of the dark abyss… and hope at the end of your shadorma set!
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November 16, 2017 at 8:18 pm
Always!😊
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November 16, 2017 at 8:06 pm
Well done! Time to move on. I like the positive note in this!
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November 16, 2017 at 8:16 pm
Thanks Toni! Happy birthday! 😊
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November 16, 2017 at 8:20 pm
❤
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November 16, 2017 at 8:23 pm
Sometimes it’s better to move on 🙂 Beautifully penned.
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November 17, 2017 at 9:36 am
Always…
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November 16, 2017 at 8:52 pm
I think it’s a good thing to find new paths after reaching a dead end.. love the sentiments
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November 17, 2017 at 9:36 am
Thanks Bjorn!
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November 16, 2017 at 9:10 pm
I like the way this spirals down then spirals back up again.
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November 17, 2017 at 9:36 am
The cycle of life…. i hope
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November 17, 2017 at 11:15 am
🙂
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November 16, 2017 at 9:12 pm
Depression is a dark friend. I am glad she rallied and found peace in new friendships.
Anna :o]
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November 17, 2017 at 8:58 am
Absolutely! Thank you 🙂
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November 16, 2017 at 9:53 pm
Powerful! A potent message for us all!
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November 16, 2017 at 10:08 pm
Letting go is hard, but sometimes very necessary! Lovely write.
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November 17, 2017 at 8:58 am
Thanks, Angela!
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November 20, 2017 at 12:17 am
You’re welcome!
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November 20, 2017 at 7:38 pm
😊
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November 16, 2017 at 11:19 pm
Good for you~ Go out and make new friends ~
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November 17, 2017 at 8:57 am
Yay!
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November 17, 2017 at 2:31 am
Moving on with hope and away from depression. A magnificent way to end a shadorma!
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November 17, 2017 at 8:56 am
Thank you Alwi!
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November 17, 2017 at 3:48 am
It is good to try to smile even when one doesn’t feel like smiling until one doesn’t have to try anymore.
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November 17, 2017 at 8:57 am
So right!
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November 17, 2017 at 11:24 am
anger is a good way out of depression. and make new friends. that’s the thing about people, there’s lots of them around. Some don’t suck.
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November 17, 2017 at 11:25 pm
😊
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November 17, 2017 at 8:13 pm
Yep, that hidden plague depression can get you if you dont watch out. Good fighting back in that last one. There’s hope there still. A nice write.
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November 17, 2017 at 11:21 pm
Thank you😊
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November 18, 2017 at 12:00 am
I agree. Depression is not a good friend, and I hope we all find better ones. 🙂
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November 18, 2017 at 12:53 am
Absolutely!
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November 18, 2017 at 9:29 am
I love these lines:
“Mired thoughts
Whirring in her mind”
the juxtaposition of mired against whirring, I can see the thoughts going round and round in a circle, getting stuck. wonderful imaging.
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November 20, 2017 at 7:42 pm
Thank you! You’re so right😊
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November 20, 2017 at 7:52 pm
Dark picture and dark thoughts. Depression makes you feel lonely.
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November 20, 2017 at 10:42 pm
So true😯
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November 25, 2017 at 12:06 am
Yep, it happens to all of us sooner or later. Of course, some are hit harder than others. But the need to move on is real. Well done.
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November 26, 2017 at 6:13 pm
Thanks Sue. I appreciate your comment.😊
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