Rapunzel! Rapunzel!
Let down your hair!
Oh my
This pose
That neck
Forgive me while I stare
I gaze at her face
Drinking in the graceful curve of her neck
What a shame, how sad for me
My Rapunzel is dead
Oh well, never mind
On my next hunt
I’ll snatch a Goldilocks instead
©Vivian Zems
Smell The Coffee 
November 5, 2017 at 1:16 am
Whoa! Caught me with that last line. Nice.
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November 5, 2017 at 3:20 am
thank you 🙂
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November 5, 2017 at 1:43 am
This made me grin hugely. What fun and how wicked.
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November 5, 2017 at 1:47 pm
Ha! A thrill-seeker at heart!
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November 5, 2017 at 4:25 am
Alas, poor Rappy.
We hardly knew her.
Hope Goldilocks has good running shoes.
namaste
JzB
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November 5, 2017 at 1:38 pm
Hope so!
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November 5, 2017 at 6:03 am
Ha! Love it. And there is something mesmerizing about a woman’s neck.
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November 5, 2017 at 1:36 pm
Are you sure you’re not here? 😉
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November 5, 2017 at 1:37 pm
I meant ” he “…..typo!
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November 5, 2017 at 6:35 am
Ooch poor Rapunzel. Goldilocks sounds easier to catch maybe
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November 5, 2017 at 1:36 pm
She’s curious – so it’ll be easy!
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November 5, 2017 at 11:21 am
There is humour here, which becomes quite chilling as the predator turns his attention to the next victim.
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November 5, 2017 at 1:35 pm
A killer who goes for hair!
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November 5, 2017 at 12:35 pm
Brutal, lol! What new form is real toads? 😉
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November 5, 2017 at 1:34 pm
Thanks 😊. Clican on the real toads link and see😊
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November 5, 2017 at 4:13 pm
Wicked! Run goldilocks, run!
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November 5, 2017 at 5:36 pm
😂
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November 5, 2017 at 6:52 pm
Delightfully wicked 🙂
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November 5, 2017 at 9:06 pm
Thank you!
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November 5, 2017 at 7:08 pm
The photo does kind of remind me of a deer hung and waiting to be skinned. Great take on the prompt!!
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November 5, 2017 at 9:07 pm
Thank you! A spooky image 🙂
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November 5, 2017 at 10:36 pm
Wicked clever Viv – and decidedly dark in the lyrical telling. Hunter hunted. A bit of light lest we think too much on the chorus of the dark deviance that is often all too real.
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November 5, 2017 at 11:24 pm
Glad you enjoyed it!
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November 6, 2017 at 2:43 am
Brilliantly wicked…..love it.
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November 6, 2017 at 3:50 am
Oh wow.. This was so dark… You go girl… Omg causing me goosebumps
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November 6, 2017 at 7:50 am
Thank you!
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November 6, 2017 at 4:03 am
Hahaha – that’s great!
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November 6, 2017 at 7:50 am
Thanks 😊
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November 6, 2017 at 2:46 pm
Clever, with some deeper thoughts of our times.
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November 6, 2017 at 4:26 pm
Thanks 😊
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