Burning fire rages spits licks and roars
Burning for as long as it wishes
Burning out only for its own sake
(#Müki)
©Vivian Zems
Mick’s Short Form Poetry Challenge #7- Sake
So, I’m trying the Müki today; it comes in a couple of categories: natural phenomena or physical geography.
the müki
lines as long as you like
but only three
Smell The Coffee 
October 31, 2017 at 4:45 pm
Lovely poem and stunning image.
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October 31, 2017 at 6:53 pm
Thank you 😊
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October 31, 2017 at 5:28 pm
Love, love, love the last line. It makes the first two so much stronger, and it leaves me saying, “Well, of course.”
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October 31, 2017 at 6:52 pm
Thanks , Magaly!
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October 31, 2017 at 7:44 pm
may this fire of hope and dreams keeps burning inside us too.
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October 31, 2017 at 8:58 pm
Agreed!
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October 31, 2017 at 8:26 pm
love the thought of the fire having its own mind
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October 31, 2017 at 8:34 pm
Such a stunning write!💞
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October 31, 2017 at 8:57 pm
Thanks, Sanaa!
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October 31, 2017 at 8:44 pm
Burn hot
Burn fast
Leave a beautiful ash
namaste
JzB
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October 31, 2017 at 8:57 pm
Thank you! Great response 😊
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October 31, 2017 at 11:32 pm
Strong ode to the fire!!! Am writing micropoetry all this month.. drop in if you get a chance!
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November 1, 2017 at 12:32 pm
Will do!
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October 31, 2017 at 11:34 pm
As do our passions.
Anna :o]
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November 1, 2017 at 12:32 pm
😊
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November 1, 2017 at 10:14 am
Burn, baby, burn. Yes, thank you!
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November 1, 2017 at 12:29 pm
A pleasure 😊
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November 1, 2017 at 7:47 pm
Fire, it scares me and it enthralls me. Beautiful piece
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November 1, 2017 at 8:57 pm
Thanks, Susie!
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