Two riders, maybe outlaws- nobody knows- ride into town. Each approaching from opposite ends, horses at a canter. They slow down, six feet apart; each posturing. Silence falls on the crowd. The riders’ jaws are set -as if afflicted with lockjaw. Their attire, costumes from another era. Their stance, ambiguous -was this a gunfight in the making or something else ?
The town’s Sheriff steps forward to begin his adjuration. He stops when he notices one rider draw his pistol and fluidly begin to perform those gunslinger tricks you hear about- but never quite see. Mayhaps this is the rider’s swan song before the final battle? Even more baffling is when the other rider breaks into song. The mellisonant tone of his voice causing the women in the crowd to swoon.
“CUT!”screams the director.
The electrics come on and the set is flooded with light.
“Have you guys been at the dope again?,” he fumed.
“Take 5!” he shouted, “and get that frog out of your throat Mr Eastwood.”
©Vivian Zems
October 31, 2017 at 12:03 am
Most entertaining Vivian, great use of the words and I love your choice of setting for your tale….
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October 31, 2017 at 5:08 am
Thanks, Michael!
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October 31, 2017 at 5:02 pm
Someone had to come up with a Western… even if it was ‘staged’…
Sorry I didn’t plan that last pun… they just happen 😉
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October 31, 2017 at 6:53 pm
Thank you 😊
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November 1, 2017 at 4:39 pm
I like how you’ve taken this in such an unexpected direction – had me thinking “what?” and chuckling the more I was reading along! Brilliant line ending too – adds just the right amount of “zing” to the piece 🙂 Clever use of the words this week Viv- well done and thanks for playing 🙂
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November 1, 2017 at 8:00 pm
Thank you- and my pleasure 😊
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November 6, 2017 at 10:54 am
Shooting from the lip – in the nicest possible way of course.
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November 6, 2017 at 4:27 pm
Of course!
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